Recent Comments

EntrancedGay92
6/6/21, 2:24 PM
This is a fantastic story so far!! I like how Cyrus' transformation is slow and gradual, not made in a moment of lust by Liam. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
6/6/21, 12:34 PM
Great story with a great ending (to be continued, I hope, with the guys in the van)! Your writing is so detailed that it makes you become part of the story & always want to read more. Your story got me so boned I ordered the glans ring, cock ring and ball stretcher. Thanks!
Jason
6/6/21, 12:14 PM
Awesome story!
6/6/21, 12:10 PM
Just found your story...excellent! I also started with the yellow snake bite kits and now use the black hard rubber ones. Your stories always get me hard & hot and this one put me over the top! Felt like I was right there in Benny & Trey's bedroom, watching it all go down (one hole or the other)! Gotta read on...and Thanks!
6/5/21, 12:43 PM
Hey just don't stop there! Now I have to wait for several more weeks! Really nice chapter and thanks for all your hard work

6/6/21, 10:51 AM
@aniburster Don't worry. It's your lucky day. I just uploaded chapter eight and it's waiting for approval. Come back in a few hours and check if it's been released. Thanks for reading and enjoying my story! :)
aloes
6/6/21, 8:49 AM
great story ! love these kind of story about game andshow .
6/6/21, 7:21 AM
Really enjoyed the writing in this story. The balance of detail and bits left for you to fill in yourself was spot on.
boi98229
6/6/21, 6:33 AM
The writing was readable with effort, but i gave up due to the number of bad spelling errors and awkward wording and misuse of words.
Anonymous
6/6/21, 3:08 AM
Thanks, loved it!
boi98229
6/6/21, 1:39 AM
Hey Draco, This is my second time reading this story. i liked it and think it has a lot of potential, but was too short with too little detail in important places, such as (like the previous comment by Anonymous) the end where both boys' minds are shut down. The story would be a lot better with more back and forth between the boys and the professor with evidence pointing in confusing directions. Perhaps Mark and Joel could come have close to proving Professor Johnson guilt in a situation in which Johnson was very close to kidnapping them and then backed off. At this point you could still do this by bringing in new students, perhaps friends of one of the boys, who are trying to find their friend.