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3/5/26, 5:57 PM
Amazing story, I'm waiting for more stories with Dean) I hope there will be new stories and continuation of old ones
Palm Springs Jonathan
3/5/26, 5:48 PM
OMG, that's one of the best erotic stories I've ever read! Please write more! I'm sitting here with a roaring hardon, wondering if I have enough time to jack it off before getting into the day's chores. I give this story an A+++!
RingMyBel
3/5/26, 5:15 PM
Please delete my previous comment so I can post it differently again.
RingMyBel
3/5/26, 5:11 PM
I'd love to see in a future chapter of this story how the woman Brad was originally going to sleep with before visiting Jacob and switching bodies with him, is going to respond when learning that the once very straight Brad is now decidedly homosexual and is no longer interested in her. Who will Brad now be pursuing in his neighborhood when it comes to his newfound attraction to other men. Perhaps one of his male coworkers or a fellow parent? Finally a question for Chastitoken. Can you provide a better physical description of Brad. You provided a light description of Jacob but I'd also like to hear a more in depth description of him as well. If at all possible do you have any pictures from the internet that align well with how you envision both Brad and Jacob look like? Thanks. Oh and pretty please continue this story Chas or anybody else for that matter. Don't leave us hanging.
QueerBoi
3/5/26, 4:22 PM
Outstanding chapter, Sir. More please.
2/28/26, 1:28 PM
Don't change it for me. I'm pretty much full of shit. Just push ahead. I just thought that YOUR head might have not been in that chapter. Thanks for taking the time to write.

2/28/26, 1:57 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) Well, you should know by now that the Queers think shit is a normal fact of life and nothing to be shied away from. :wink: I’m new to writing and just a bit surprised that you saw through me. Chapter 5 _does_ read as rushed, as I read back through it. At this point Bob/Meatsack _is_ an ancillary character. I did not give him much thought, so I did not write much. But he deserves better than to be treated as disposable. We are all the main characters in our own story, after all. I did not step inside his (somewhat empty, if I’m to be honest) head, but I really should try. Who knows what we’ll find inside there? The next chapter is already in the publication pipeline and the one after that is fully-written in my head and 3/4 of the way typed out. So I have some time to spare.

3/5/26, 2:14 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) I took another pass through Chapter 5 and it's up now. I slowed down the first two transformations and discovered a couple of changes to Bob & Dell that I hadn't noticed the first time around, with Bob's leading to a bit of fun. Larsen's transformation is unchanged, except for a change of outfit that I thought was more fitting. If you have time, give it a read-through and let me know what you think. Thanks.
3/5/26, 2:08 PM
...when he spit into Liam's eager mouth while he was 10 inches deep into him, that was the best erotic writing I have ever experienced. It was just like a masterpiece. You are so incredibly good at storytelling and ... DANG... that moment was unique, unexpected, and so intense for me. I wish Liam would let Noah be Noah. Why is he pushing him to be more expressive? it bugs me. Noah is Noah and frankly it works perfectly. Oh gosh... I am ALL IN on this story.
3/5/26, 11:03 AM
Oh, I am very late to the party but I gotta throw my hats off to you. This is amazing! The whole thing has been hot as fuck. The current ending is a bit of a cliff hanger, but I know what its like when the words dont flow so I would never demand more. But if there ever WERE more. Randomly. Eventually. Surprisingly? I would be HERE for that and love every word.
Anonymous
3/5/26, 12:49 AM
We want more!!!

3/5/26, 9:59 AM
@Anonymous 😃 Really glad you like it. This is intended as a one-off, but it certainly leaves things open for other transformations I could come back to. I have a few other things I'm working on, first, though, that I hope you'll like, too.
3/5/26, 8:52 AM
I agree that it splits into 3 and 1 of them comes find me ASAP.