Recent Comments

11/8/21, 8:06 PM
NICE!
11/8/21, 7:50 PM
Great story, but I think part of a paragraph got left out right as the kid starts the induction.

11/8/21, 8:03 PM
@Evelded surprisingly (and i say that because when i first tried to post the chapter the whole first five parts were missing until after i clicked around XD) the induction came out as i hoped. I figured that sense Drake had already consumed some alcohol, it made the induction easier since his mind was already starting to get foggy. Thanks for the comment, love, and support!! -Grim 💀🖤
11/8/21, 2:16 PM
The tempo remains great here! Feels like it’s building toward something—looking forward to culmination. (Culmination autocorrected to cum inflation on my phone. If you know it you know it =P )

11/8/21, 7:35 PM
@Soren Fitz Haha your phone is getting too intuitive!
11/8/21, 2:07 PM
The subtle homoeroticism during the cupcake scene is great and keeps the sexual tempo up. I enjoyed it!

11/8/21, 7:34 PM
@Soren Fitz Love a bit of homoeroticism!
11/8/21, 2:05 PM
The slow burn switch here is good—you used that sex scene in the first chapter to get readers hooked, and the idea here is great.

11/8/21, 7:32 PM
@Soren Fitz Wow. You have a good eye for detail. Well done on picking up on that change of pace. It was a deliberate move to slow down the story and move from sex to romance, reflecting on the character's changing motivations. I appreciate you mentioning it!
11/8/21, 2:02 PM
Your writing style is easy to read and yet flows really well and has great descriptions! Your concision + elegance is admirable. Keep up the good work. (Also, the sex scene was hot.)

11/8/21, 7:29 PM
@Soren Fitz Aww thank you so much. I really appreciate the feedback about my writing style! It's great to hear you are enjoying it.
11/8/21, 7:24 PM
Nothing beats a good ass kissing scene. hopefully it was a tasty and humbling experience. keep up the great work
Dee
11/8/21, 7:16 PM
Nice story waiting for more
11/8/21, 6:18 PM
WOW! Very impressive story! I like the transformation! Although at times it was a bit too cruel, I enjoyed a lot with all the humiliation elements (especially the failed interview and Aaron clothes and debasement during the whole thing), and the dumbing down. I'll take a look at your previous stories, since this was very enjoyable!