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12/2/21, 9:23 PM
You've successfully taken this story to a whole new level. He realizes his gift with his jock body. He visualizes how his body looks to all these guys. He can sense the envy of his perfection and youth. Enjoyed the scene two chapters back where he notes to his friends going out on the boardwalk to show off their calves. He can see the aesthetics of his alpha qualities and gifted legs, arms, calves. Would like to see him really having to delve into how best he might wear clothes to be more revealing knowing the tease. His cut-out muscle tank along with tapered shorts. Wears his wrestling shoes to accentuate. He's constantly fighting the exposure yet lusting after the scene. Finds a mirror on that boardwalk to gleam over his body... in his wrestling street clothes. Gets himself too hot over his own body.
EJG
12/1/21, 9:52 PM
Great start.Hoping 4 more of the app turning Nate into a slut.

12/2/21, 9:19 PM
@EJG just you wait ;)
12/2/21, 9:12 PM
Love it!
Unowned slave
12/2/21, 6:49 PM
a dream
Zac
12/2/21, 6:10 PM
> "Fuck, this guy was getting on my nerves. Of course, I’ve never been hypnotised. Giving up control like that to someone puny and weak like him? Being a mindless helpless zombie, my lean muscled body just a plaything for my master? Yeah, that’s pretty fucking sexy, but it’s not possible." This part made me insta-hard.
Adonis
12/2/21, 2:29 PM
Sorry this took so long. There were very annoying things happening in my life, so it was stopping any progress I made with the story. Thank you to Elmara for reminding me!
Nov 23, 2021
12/2/21, 7:27 AM
Can't say I'm not disappointed it won't continue, seems perfect for a sequel hahaha But I can't be too disappointed because your latest story was so excellent! You're a great writer

12/2/21, 9:25 AM
@GiveInToTheMusk ahaha thank you that's really good to hear because whenever I read what I write I always find it cringy lmao

12/2/21, 2:15 PM
@burntoutmilk Frig, i should have said seems RIPE for a sequel..... 😅🙈
12/1/21, 8:02 PM
oh this chapter was hot cant for the next to finally see his uncle getting his cherry popped i wonder if Vince will be cruel

Blackjinx123
12/2/21, 1:21 PM
@Diyù, thank you so much, I'm glad you like it! and you can always count on Vince to be cruel, even if its only a little ;)
mcdermottr13@gmail.com
11/30/21, 5:50 PM
I've been patiently waiting for this. Thank you for keeping this story going. I love what you're doing with the characters keep it up please.

Blackjinx123
12/2/21, 1:19 PM
@mcdermottr13@gmail.com, your patiences is greatly appreciated, and i plan on seeing this through to the end, even if it takes me a a little longer than anticipated. I'm so happy your enjoying it so far!
12/2/21, 1:14 PM
please post more chapters soon. loving this story so much