Recent Comments

Martin
2/8/22, 9:53 PM
I'm a late reader of this chapter... but I have to chime in to add my praises. This chapter is a lot of exposition, but man how much fantasy and creativity is there inside of you. I wonder where you get this from. What it must be looking like inside of your head. Anyway, I'm looking forward to read the final chapter!

2/9/22, 1:13 AM
@Martin Thank you Cap'n, and I appreciate you reading this even though it's not your normal material.
Martin
2/8/22, 10:04 PM
Such a bitter-sweet story. Forbidden love indeed, and it always invokes anger that people had (and still have) to suffer this. Thank you for this great experience. 5/5 for writing and romance.

2/9/22, 1:05 AM
Thanks, @Martin! I appreciate the feedback :)
2/9/22, 12:16 AM
Im loving this spin on the Pollination series. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Sparks
2/8/22, 11:30 PM
woah this was amazing! Love seeing this fantastic story develop!
Apr 19, 2010
2/8/22, 11:11 PM
the mom getting killed was kinda out of nowhere and weird but the rest of it was super hot lol
2/8/22, 10:04 PM
been waiting for this! was worth the wait! can't wait for the next part
Anonymous
2/8/22, 9:10 PM
Wow, that did not take long at all. Poor dumb Dallas has no idea what is happening.
2/8/22, 8:02 PM
A very hot story. I could almost smell the big man's musk as I read it.
2/8/22, 7:28 PM
Very nice.
2/8/22, 6:54 PM
I dunno how I missed this one but I'm glad i caught it now. Hotter than hot!