Recent Comments

10/4/25, 2:33 PM
I’m obsessed. This just gets more interesting—the way Aiden starts being able to slip his own will into commands, the curious cooperation, and of course all of this is so horny and hot. Love the truly obscene amount of cum—you know me.
10/4/25, 2:20 PM
Gods this is so _interesting_ and hot, there’s this cleverness and self-awareness in the POV, a low gnawing tension while I wonder how/when the ball will drop, and the really delicious fact that it’s ask so hot. You really feel for Aiden.
10/4/25, 2:13 PM
One simple mistake: jock for jockstrap. And now the dominance is unleashed. Fuck I want more mistakes to manipulate these characters, especially Gabe.
10/4/25, 2:07 PM
Oh, this is so heart-wrenchingly beautiful. There’s a perverse thrill in the pain and bullying, mixed with this gnawing pity and despair. Thank you for this.
Anonymous
10/4/25, 1:16 PM
Thank you for this story, I like it very much if it s so close as possible to reality. And you human approach is absolutely my cup of tea.
9/30/25, 9:22 PM
So hot. So well structured! Great continuation to an already great story.

10/4/25, 1:14 PM
@[DadisTopped](/user/show/10031852) Thanks for the praise mate! Glad you enjoyed the second chapter
10/4/25, 5:58 AM
Listen, this is not usually my kink, but like the other commenters have said the writing and plot and _care_ in this have me hooked. Thank you for this story.
10/4/25, 4:49 AM
Yes, once again, keep those chapters coming. I enjoy reading the story.
Anonymous
10/4/25, 2:35 AM
Your writing is incredible! This isn't just a chapter, it's a whole mini-story, and it's so engrossing. This is your best work yet: I love the unreliable narrator and I love your characters. This is genius work.
10/2/25, 9:18 PM
ok i have to admit that i waited for a "real" chapter before reading it and the fuckass framing device, lol. both are dotted with so much silly humor without losing the hot descriptions -- i'm truly enjoying the style! can't wait to see how you interpret the free space at the end, and there are lots of fun prompts along the way. i love seeing what people create from that kinktober calendar, no matter the medium

10/3/25, 9:55 PM
@[Razz TFs](/user/show/272667) Thank you so much! I'm glad the style is working for you! I was a little concerned about doing this screenplay/prose fusion, but I have been enjoying working on it for this particular challenge. (also, thanks for calling my stuff funny. i try)