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10/26/25, 1:32 PM
Loved this story!
10/26/25, 1:26 PM
I enjoy how Ivan is accepting this more and more. And now reading that Jake is caged just adds to that. Though i wonder if the coaches will get too greedy and this all falls apart? Also, since this story is closely mirrored to Brody's Fall, I wonder if rubber will be introduced? Maybe not a full suit like that story, but maybe as underwear and swimwear, or even a singlet?
Anonymous
10/26/25, 12:37 PM
Yeah this is being WAY too morbid for me. I used to get off on reading the first few chapters and even put it in my favorite list but Ivan's humiliation is DRAGGING on and on. And I guess he's just a dumb jock because he really can NOT find a way to get out -- which to me is unbelievable. I'm out.
10/26/25, 12:15 PM
omg i love that. pls the new chapter 🔥
10/26/25, 12:07 PM
Wow, i love love this chapter. So hot. A top and verse transformation. And where can i find an Alpha Andy?
10/26/25, 11:01 AM
Messed up, dark, I loved it
10/26/25, 10:18 AM
I know it’s been a while but I’d really love to see a continuation to this!
1/9/20, 6:23 AM
Fuckin hot. Now i gotta go read everything you ever wrote.

10/26/25, 9:39 AM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) So geht es mir auch, ich kann es nicht anders. Dies Geschichte ist so geil und fesseln.
10/26/25, 9:38 AM
Nice, but I'd have thought the father would end as a flashlight for both jocks, being fucked over and over by them. But it's a nice story anyway
Steve89
10/25/25, 4:07 PM
Woah too many haters here! The slow burn is the best part, keep up the great work man.

10/25/25, 5:36 PM
@Steve89 brooo fr lmao comes with the territory i guess good lookin out tho — real one

Anonymous
10/26/25, 8:59 AM
@[lucas pucci](/user/show/10040865) Keep doing gods work my man, the majority of us really appreciate the effort that’s going in