Recent Comments

Evan
10/10/22, 1:44 AM
This is a great opening setup. Love the descriptions and especially his inability it resist giving into that pleasure when he touched himself. Great job! Thanks for writing. Hope to see more if you choose to continue.
10/10/22, 1:43 AM
Hot n horny story. Cigars, mind control and daddy domination :white_check_mark::white_check_mark::white_check_mark: Fantastic :wink:
10/10/22, 1:24 AM
I think the confusion comes from this reading as if it's the continuation of another story. You're not really introduced to the characters and their roles before the sudden role reversal happens. Like only after the reversal you're really given the context of what's happening. It's like being thrown into the second half of a story where you missed the first half.
Mar 20, 2015
10/10/22, 1:06 AM
Hot story. Needs a part 2 to really get the juices flowing, but a great beginning nevertheless.
Anonymous
10/8/22, 10:49 AM
Love it! Thanks for posting it.

10/10/22, 1:03 AM
@[Jock](/user/show/1004354) and i appreciate anyone bothering to read my work
10/10/22, 1:02 AM
Just read both chapters. The second chapter is what got me! I like the dad’s obliviousness. Perhaps im the next chapter, he can step in and do some demonstrations as well? Can’t wait to see more
10/10/22, 1:01 AM
Really hot transformation. Whould be hot to know what happened to the diaper jocks!
Carus
10/9/22, 10:39 PM
Grammerly, even the free one, can often pick up misspellings that are spelled right but not the right word, so if you're looking then maybe give that a try otherwise I'm sure myself or somone else can help edit any stories.

10/9/22, 11:18 PM
@[Carus](/user/show/10001298) I tend to be too lazy to deal with those and just re read it myself. I might have to do more before I post the next story here.
Satyr Hedonist
10/9/22, 11:12 PM
This was very liberating indeed! Thank you!
SailorD52
10/9/22, 10:21 PM
Great story! Loved seeing the portly guy be dominant and loved.