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2/22/26, 2:10 AM
Vivid and lyrical, charming and captivating, the flow is so smooth you don't realize everything's going 90 miles an hour as Adrian plows his way across Manhattan racing the eclipse towards Colin's ass. Adrian's improvised depraved realities and his blow-by-blow descriptions blow my mind, so literate and hot AF. This is an inspired story. Can't wait to see if Adrian beats the clock (and Colin's ass)! :)
2/22/26, 2:08 AM
The mind control progresses and reading this story gets me hornier and hornier. Every word seems to go straight to my mind
2/22/26, 1:52 AM
The more the boys are getting dominated, the hotter gets the story. And the rewards for fulfilling their services very good get more and more sexual. Leads to get homosexual?
2/22/26, 1:39 AM
The material gets more and more isolated from thinking about family and friends and so it gets more and more dependant from the superiors. That's why the humiliation is progressing very successful
2/22/26, 1:29 AM
Women are human too and it's good that they are not completely excluded from material's life
2/22/26, 1:03 AM
The style you write is very good, but still i can't imagine where the story will go to and why the rules are so strong for the young boys. But i'm fixed continuing to read
2/21/26, 11:43 PM
It's shitty when you don't get any feedback. Stinkers don't know how difficult it is to write. I know, I've been working on the same story for 15 years.
2/21/26, 11:27 PM
. Maybe a Stinking Romance for Kinky Fuckers? I can't ever find enough pieces on this site that spend the time on smells. You get that.
2/21/26, 11:26 PM
thank you so much for writing this, I just read chapters 1 - 6 all in one go and am loving your ideas so much! After years of reading porn stories, it's rare to come across something so fresh and original. Also, the mental play and what you're doing to Sam and Joe's bodies is just delicious. Never doubt yourself, and indeed do keep going with whatever feels right (even if it's not what you planned in a brainstorm) x my artist website is justjake.co.uk if you want to have a look / get in touch. I would happily draw some of these scenes
2/21/26, 11:04 PM
To quote Dell: "Impressive!" And the story unfolded naturally without violating the laws of physics or nature. You've got style.