Recent Comments

11/15/25, 6:22 PM
This was so hot, I cant wait to read more. I love Andy as an alpha, the way you write him to be both dominant and caring. Personally a big fan of these gentle(?) doms, that will call you a pup, slut and a cumdump, but without any sense of humiliation, only pride and praise. Cant wait to see how it resolves, really enjoying the competition between Parker and Andy. Personally hoping Parkers plan doesnt quite work out, and Andy gets to at least stay his equal (though the other option is just as hot). Excited to see what Parkers plans are for Dalton. And damn did that last fuck hit all my kinks - incest, pup play, big top smaller bot AND small top big bot. And theres just something about a 'guy being fucked into you, leaning on your chest for support, looking up at you with those puppy eyes full of pleasure, that just does it for me. Anyway, amazing job, 10/10, keep it up!
10/28/25, 5:04 AM
Fuuuuuck I need to read more Viktor and Ivan time together! It’s so exciting getting updates on Viktor’s transformation~

11/15/25, 5:38 PM
@[Tusky](/user/show/10018152) yes
11/15/25, 5:37 PM
we want the new chapter
11/15/25, 5:14 PM
@nothingville the third time through was the charm. You might say i am addicted to this story 😀
11/13/25, 9:54 AM
Lol I was turn off by this story to the extreme XD not because it's bad, but I can't take it seriously because I call my good uncle, uncle John.

11/14/25, 11:57 PM
@[JRZTT](/user/show/14915) Would it have been fine if the uncle had a different name?

11/15/25, 7:57 AM
@[iDubbOldChubb](/user/show/10037179) Yeah XD but this is just my internal feeling, this is your story. It's good, I just can't ... to it XD

11/15/25, 4:24 PM
@[JRZTT](/user/show/14915) Okay cool. Thanks for the feedback.
Anonymous
11/15/25, 3:13 PM
so hot!!! great development of the characters too... look forward to the next chapter...
Anonymous
11/15/25, 3:00 PM
its hot ,i love it so much
JackOfFetish
11/15/25, 2:57 PM
I liked this story. I agree that there was some phrase that you could have used in a different way. But I like the way you lured the dad into having sex with his son and friend. It sound well done and realistic.
11/15/25, 12:05 PM
Love it❤️🔥🙏
8/11/25, 1:58 AM
i love this amazing story of domination and control! The idea of a combination of a drug and hypnosis working synergistically so effectively to provide a powerful tool for owning and training a slave is so so hot!! Cage did do an enthralling job of pacing Denton's transition. Unfortunately i do have some trouble getting around the moral/ethical problem with the transformation being totally non-consensual every step of the way. Clearly Cage intends the transformation to be a permanent and apparently continuing to be knowingly non-consensual. i grant that as a boss Denton was a total jerk, but in my judgement he doesn't deserve his entire life to be turned upside down. I think a little karma along the way and demotion or firing would have been more appropriate. Fortunately for me, i am okay with taking enjoyment from some parts of a fantasy and ignoring others.

Throne
8/11/25, 4:57 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment. In real life, I believe in consensual relationships with set limits. Sometimes when fantasizing, however, I can't resist imagining an unwilling person trapped in a nasty situation with no way to escape. Glad you can mentally edit, to enjoy the parts that work for you.

11/15/25, 9:22 AM
@Throne Actually, i am totally with you. If a story is hot and touching on all my kinks, i am completely forgiving of non-consensual fantasy. i am also very intrigued in real life with the possibilities of mind control, and would love to experience various forms of loss of control -- so much so that i would with right persons and with sufficient prior communication on hard limits, i would happily agree to consensual non-consent activities. I want to know what it would feel like to give up all mental and physical control to another person -- somewhat like the newly resident doctors induced 'death' just to experience it in the movie 'Flatliners'.