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6/7/25, 2:37 PM
Real hot! Moves a bit too fast though. I'd like more time to sit with the transformation, personally. Still, good job
Zander
6/7/25, 2:16 PM
I hope the plot moves forward and others realize that Manny is under control and will all follow him together and find a secret hideout where they are all turned into slaves.
Zander
6/7/25, 2:07 PM
Great story, it's a pity that it's written slowly, like others in this universe.
6/6/25, 9:36 PM
Hey this is so cool! I cannot wait to read more.

6/7/25, 1:29 PM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) Glad you like the story so far! More chapters will be forthcoming!
6/6/25, 11:11 PM
The set up is so good ! I'm hooked !

6/7/25, 1:29 PM
@[HypnoPete](/user/show/14634) Thanks! Appreciate your kind words!
Anonymous
6/6/25, 11:52 PM
I want the two next! Haha

6/7/25, 1:29 PM
@Anonymous Third chapter is up!
6/7/25, 1:19 PM
This is WILDLY interesting. You are the BEST writer I know! This guy Yosuf is BAD NEWS
Zander
6/7/25, 1:13 PM
It seems to me that arrogance will destroy Raj) just like in the comics Metal (about the laughing Batman) DS vs. Vampires and other big crossovers where Evil always wins and there is no salvation, something always happens in the end that everything changes and the characters are saved and get out of the situation (everything falls into place). Although I think it will depend on the author)
6/6/25, 11:37 PM
Ahhh Red!!!

6/7/25, 10:22 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) Yes, Red! :p
6/7/25, 9:13 AM
Excellent struggle for ideas

6/7/25, 10:21 AM
@[Ozzy](/user/show/10048159) Hehe, thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!