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5/7/22, 2:30 PM
What an awesome chapter, I love how Xander is finally getting to feel the love that he deserves from Lucas, can’t wait to read more!
5/7/22, 1:51 PM
Not only is the story excellently crafted, but the world building and lore begin to shine. The story is undoubtedly sexy and our protagonist is just such a treat. I liked the shift in focus and that Finn is on the edges but not yet back into focus. The djinn consciousness was a very interesting surprise, but most of all, you started talking in gaming/mmo language and you totally got me there! I hope you continue building this up as it has a lot of promise for fun.
Anonymous
5/7/22, 1:36 PM
I know it's been years but would still love to see another chapter of this series!
5/7/22, 12:53 PM
Great story!
5/7/22, 11:58 AM
GodDAMN that was fucking explosively hot! Love to read about guys giving in to the urge to dominate. Excellent work as usual, sir!
5/6/22, 2:27 PM
So the sperm is not only used as gasoline but electricity substitute. Won’t the men be too tired to supply energy? Besides, we also need energy to produce food for these men. That might make this system lethal. But the story is so hot that I can ignore these questions.

Kip
5/6/22, 3:11 PM
@Tofu83 this question actually clarified a couple of things that have been rolling around in my head, so I appreciate that. Some of the things you mention will be addressed for sure, though a lot of it just has to rely on suspension of disbelief and Star Wars-ish “science magic” to work. I appreciate the comment about the story being hot. I was afraid the second segment wasn’t hot enough, so much so that I totally found myself resorting to some Game of Thrones-ish sexposition, so I appreciate that. 😀

Kip
5/6/22, 6:46 PM
@Tofu83 also, Jon (and presumably the populace at large) THINKS it’s semen, but is it really? 🧐

5/7/22, 11:03 AM
@Kip Glad to know there will be solutions. Star-Warsish science magic is not bad actually. Not semen? Don’t leave us hanging, next chapter please 🙏
5/5/22, 8:18 AM
Hot story, there was an error in displaying the word length so I resubmitted it. Definitely hyped to see where this story goes for sure.

5/7/22, 10:55 AM
@Norismo thank you for doing that :)
5/6/22, 9:40 PM
Not since Morgan Blackthorne's 'A Breed Apart' have I read such well-crafted prose about debasement, desperate craven sluttiness, and unwitting mental transformation/enslavement. Bravo!! I encourage you to write more.

5/7/22, 10:55 AM
@Rock Creek Werewolf with comments like that, of course I will. You keep my writer's fuel burning ;)
JR
5/7/22, 10:50 AM
Love this story. I can’t wait until the next chapter.
5/7/22, 10:41 AM
Not sure if like papa or not. Sure mildred wasn't good but is just a divorce impossible? And things were fine with the new livers. This feels much like mildred. Warping identity to fulfill own design Oh fuck this is hiddy, fun, hot Sad not his real dad. But i suppose improvement Naybe Man this confusing