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9/22/25, 8:25 AM
Cool story, though it did get a little too metaphysical for my tastes and made the narrative kind of confusing

9/22/25, 10:37 AM
@[ShadowWalker](/user/show/10025715) Yeah that's fair lol. I was in a strange mood when I wrote it. The gist of it is, that Edward, as a being that should have never existed in the first place (a monster/human hybrid), was himself a monster. But not just half Gorgon, a narrative monster that was effectively a reader given power over the script where he could make changes to it and the script would act as if those changes were always there and write itself accordingly (since fiction inherently has to be logically consistent). When he ascended to godhood (a position directly linked to a particular brand of metaphysics) he went from reader with author powers to the author itself, and was thus able to destroy the original script (where he never existed and thus none of his changes) making his altered version the only version of the story. He was able to get that metaphysical authority since it was only logical characters in a story would regard a being that's made every character in it both suffer and find happiness in equal messure a monster. Since authors inherently don't care about the characters in it, just whatever makes a good story or at least one they'd want to write.
Anonymous
8/15/16, 6:43 PM
Totally wish this was a reciprocal thing. Like some catty fag turns into a big fat daddy while this happens to a mean bear guy.

Anonymous
9/22/25, 9:35 AM
@Anonymous Agreed
9/22/25, 7:46 AM
Great. This really needs a continuation.
9/22/25, 7:24 AM
Oh my god, this was so hot. I already love it when sons fuck their dads and expected Teddy to join in on the fun, but fuck, having him just as subby was the perfect choice. I'm barely keeping myself from cumming, just to be able to finish the story.
9/22/25, 6:15 AM
Damn, this was so fucking hot! Love all the subby daddies just begging for the cocks of these young studs. Hope you continue, really interested in that coach.
Latexlover
9/22/25, 5:22 AM
OMG yes please
9/22/25, 3:25 AM
loved this story all the way through from the beginning...more i read the more i felt like i was being programmed...so hot. wondering where it is going from here now that Mike is responding to training without being triggered
9/22/25, 2:49 AM
This was such an awesome and sexy chapter! Just wanted to make that clear!
9/22/25, 2:34 AM
Great story. I wonder if they're gonna find something else that's worse than a centaur boyfriend with a huge dick lol.
9/21/25, 10:21 PM
Bienvenidos a la zona de comentario, las nalgas del boxeador de Milton en esta ocasión estarán “sujetando" cada comentario que coloques -Marshall quería participar pero sus enormes huevos tapan toda la entrada-. No tengan miedo, su culo está más que preparado para recibir los comentarios más largos posibles :peach: