Recent Comments

12/17/25, 10:38 PM
Great chapter, looking forward to the continuation.
Jakey
12/17/25, 8:54 AM
So amazing! Continuously arousing as every scene built and more and more men fell into the service of our demonic lord!

12/17/25, 9:25 PM
@Jakey Our Demonic Lord indeed!

12/17/25, 9:36 PM
@Jakey Haha thank you!
12/17/25, 9:24 PM
Hell!!! It’s one of the best stories here indeed! Loved the ending, no disappointing Light wining at the end, and absolutely gorgeous graphics! Wow!!! Wish I were there!

12/17/25, 9:36 PM
@[RagingBull](/user/show/10012270) Thank you so much! Absolutely the dark had to win here because ...it's mudh more fun haha
Tim
12/17/25, 9:15 PM
Every time I come back to this site and come across this story I always wondered if there would be a new installment or chapter posted…. Hoping soon that there would be a new one
12/17/25, 7:21 PM
wondering if another chapter will be made.
Dec 15, 2025
12/16/25, 7:19 AM
Holy fucking fuck that was a hot one! You took a classic concept and yet it unique and fresh. The sex scenes were amazing and the ending was *chef's kiss*. This is one of those stories where I want more but at the same time it is perfect as it is. You know what? Scratch that. I **definitely** need more of that. I loved the giving in to tops and their constant competition between themselves, especially when in the end everything was good and happy.

12/16/25, 3:49 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Thank you! TBD if I write another one, but nice comments like this make me want to!

12/17/25, 6:56 PM
@[Max Lode](/user/show/338113) Very well done! I hope you do write another because you can't leave a cliffhanger like that lol. I'm curious the relationship between Bryce and his uncle, if it's a rivalry of sorts, a bet that nothing would break Luke to have sex with another.
12/17/25, 6:49 PM
Wow! So so hot!! Chastity can be such a great tool for initiating, demonstrating, and maintaining dominance and control! i am convinced though that frequent edging occasionally followed by a full orgasm, more edging and forced orgasms are important to avoid diminishing libido over time. i suspect that chastity almost becomes irrelevant for control if the sub's libido drops too low. That is all my own hypothesis at least. i am so willing (excited actually) to act in the role of the submissive if there is a Dom out there who wants to test this hypothesis. Of course it would help if this Dom were an experienced Master who owns a small harem to volunteer as test subjects. The Dom (soon to be Master?!) in this story has the chops to make this happen. Having written this story, perhaps the author has a similar Alpha perspective as the story's Master. If so please feel free to contact me, Sir! In the meantime, thank you so much, Sir, for sharing your wonderful imagination!
12/13/25, 4:50 PM
Dude, Another great chapter, as was the one before this and the one before that, etc... hahaha. The psychological and physical games Noah plays with Liam are amazing and hot and sometimes hilarious to watch. Will getting fucked be a turning point for Liam? Might be hot to see him make a stand to gain back control only to get tripped up and stuck tighter in Noah's web. :muscle:

12/17/25, 5:20 PM
@[Muscle-Flex-1](/user/show/2059714) yeah man the storys main theme is emotional and psychological manipulation! im thrilled ure enjoying it srsly!! you might actually like noahs pov too!
12/16/25, 6:09 PM
The transformations are soooo hot! I hope there'd be an "Another Eve of Becoming" story too just like Curse of Entity! ❤️

12/17/25, 3:20 PM
@[srrecca](/user/show/10059619) Possibly! The spirit moved on due to being able to bring happiness. That doesn’t mean that another spirit can’t do the same. :wink:

12/17/25, 4:08 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) OMG please do so, I'm so looking forward to it! I love your stories so much 🤩

12/17/25, 5:06 PM
@[srrecca](/user/show/10059619) Thank you! I’m working on another chapter of do as you’re told. Called “A New Kind of Basic Training.”
12/17/25, 1:49 AM
If he gets restored he might enjoy being cake again one day.

12/17/25, 4:57 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I should know what's gonna happen here in another chapter or two, but I think I'm gonna set this aside for a while and come back to finishing a football gear story that's been rattling around in my head for a few years. Seems to be working its way up to the front of the queue