Recent Comments

12/28/25, 5:11 PM
I agree with the first responder on structure as it was unclear who was speaking at times. I don't see Superman turning black, but black male obsessed. It seems that you've already changed Luther. I believe it should correctly be spelled Luthor.
12/28/25, 3:47 PM
Nicely done.

12/28/25, 5:02 PM
@[blankbot](/user/show/1247965) Thanks! My first attempt at actually writing some of the spicier fantasies that jump into my head.
12/28/25, 1:34 AM
Continua pleaseeeee...

12/28/25, 5:01 PM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) Absolutely! Working on revising chapter 2. I made some changes to the plot later on and now need to to back and change several characters.
12/28/25, 4:48 PM
Good start. 😉
12/28/25, 3:57 PM
Can't wait for more
12/28/25, 3:51 PM
This should also be tagged with race play lol. The story is alright structure could be improved.
12/28/25, 3:01 PM
Eine schöne Geschichte, es ist das pure Leben. Wenn ein Homophober Matscho Kerl, sein platz für sein weiteres Leben zugewiesen bekommt und nicht dass wie er vorstell. Ein sehr süßes Leben, wo er sich voll und ganz ausleben kann.
12/28/25, 11:19 AM
Very hot!!!😍😍😍
Max
12/28/25, 11:15 AM
Please continue I’d love to read more
12/28/25, 10:03 AM
Nothing is more satisfying than seeing pseudo-heroes reduced to pathetic little sex slaves. Great story and episode, I'm eagerly awaiting the next one.