Recent Comments

Thom J
12/28/25, 10:07 PM
Magnificent!!! Rang all the bells. Great story, progression. Perfect writing. Definitely needs a follow-up!!!
12/28/25, 9:37 PM
Really hope there will be a new chapter of this soon... :pray:
12/28/25, 8:35 PM
😈😈😈
12/28/25, 5:20 PM
Love this. Hope Steve changes his mind about showing off 😉
12/28/25, 5:11 PM
I agree with the first responder on structure as it was unclear who was speaking at times. I don't see Superman turning black, but black male obsessed. It seems that you've already changed Luther. I believe it should correctly be spelled Luthor.
12/28/25, 3:47 PM
Nicely done.

12/28/25, 5:02 PM
@[blankbot](/user/show/1247965) Thanks! My first attempt at actually writing some of the spicier fantasies that jump into my head.
12/28/25, 1:34 AM
Continua pleaseeeee...

12/28/25, 5:01 PM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) Absolutely! Working on revising chapter 2. I made some changes to the plot later on and now need to to back and change several characters.
12/28/25, 4:48 PM
Good start. 😉
12/28/25, 3:57 PM
Can't wait for more
12/28/25, 3:51 PM
This should also be tagged with race play lol. The story is alright structure could be improved.