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10/22/25, 3:43 AM
So hot, would love to be in his situation

12/29/25, 2:45 AM
@[Nick M](/user/show/10067567) Thanks for taking the time to say so! It really encourages me to try and write more!
SUPABOIvsVILLIAN
12/28/25, 8:45 PM
BRAVO Plymouth58! What a thoughtful gift you gave your Superman-fan songwriting friend this holiday season!!:clap: To top that off, he was gracious enough to allow you to share it with the group-- which is AWESOME-- THANK YOU BOTH!:grin: As a Superman fan myself (btw...I imagine I've gotta be in the Top5/T10 for sure, LOL!), I admired the approach/idea & how you were inspired by The Hypno guy on YouTube--It was quite satisfying to read how the Professor de-programmed the unsuspecting hero...I hope that you will be able continue to serve us an occasional chapter in the New Year--Again, Brilliant work & THX 4 Sharing with the group!

12/29/25, 12:15 AM
@SUPABOIvsVILLIAN Thank you so much, SUPABOIvsVILLIAN! I'm glad you liked it; I'll pass on your thanks to my friend. There will definitely be more of this story (I already have some points in mind and scenes to develop), and I also want to continue with the other stories I have. Thank you so much for the words of encouragement and support!
Anonymous
12/28/25, 6:47 AM
Great story, nothing better than making a hero miserable and watching him regress to a mindless sex-obsessed state. Keep making us fantasize and don't worry about the nasty comments.

12/29/25, 12:06 AM
@Anonymous Thank you very much! I'll do :blush:!
Thom J
12/28/25, 10:07 PM
Magnificent!!! Rang all the bells. Great story, progression. Perfect writing. Definitely needs a follow-up!!!
12/28/25, 9:37 PM
Really hope there will be a new chapter of this soon... :pray:
12/28/25, 8:35 PM
😈😈😈
12/28/25, 5:20 PM
Love this. Hope Steve changes his mind about showing off 😉
12/28/25, 5:11 PM
I agree with the first responder on structure as it was unclear who was speaking at times. I don't see Superman turning black, but black male obsessed. It seems that you've already changed Luther. I believe it should correctly be spelled Luthor.
12/28/25, 3:47 PM
Nicely done.

12/28/25, 5:02 PM
@[blankbot](/user/show/1247965) Thanks! My first attempt at actually writing some of the spicier fantasies that jump into my head.
12/28/25, 1:34 AM
Continua pleaseeeee...

12/28/25, 5:01 PM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) Absolutely! Working on revising chapter 2. I made some changes to the plot later on and now need to to back and change several characters.