Recent Comments

12/26/25, 3:20 AM
First off let me say welcome and thank you for taking the step across the threshold to writing stories. There's nothing wrong with using AI to help edit your work so feel free to continue on using AI to get the work to the submission point. The story is great; you build the world and the two central characters very nicely. The dynamics between Arin and Nathan are developed very smoothly. It's a great first piece. And I'm curious to see what awaits Nathan under Arin's guidance. I could see Nathan developing a group of students that are open to Arin's influence. (Perhaps that's an idea for you to run with. I could see this going a number of ways now that I've put this down.) But I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with this story. You've built a rather nice world and two intriguing characters; it's only natural to want to see where they go and how the world changes as a result. So congratulations on getting starting on the journey of being an author; looking forward to seeing where you go.

12/26/25, 3:19 PM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Thank you for the welcome, encouragements, assessment. It means a lot. :) As for the route of the story, your suggestion is genuinely hot to explore. However the problem comes down to me or my 'skill' limitation to be more specific. For now I think it is wiser for me to approach it conservatively especially when it comes to introducing new characters. It doesn't mean I would not get there. I just don't think I have the necessary skill to commit to it (yet). BUT! I am learning. :) and I will get there eventually. What I can share to you about the next chapter is that as I am exploring some hot scenarios, I am also exploring the right methods to frame/depict them. And since (just like you) I am more interested in the mind control aspect of the story rather than the sex, I tend to explore and pay more attention to the 'hottest' way to depict mental submission without being over-bearing, repetitive, or too academic. Again... Thank you. Such a fan for your stories btw :D Glad you give a piece of your mind to my first story.

12/26/25, 10:25 PM
@[DanGlyn](/user/show/10024156) Thank you for supporting my work; it's always good to hear from people who read and support the work. I'd definitely support going where you feel comfortable writing. As a speaker of another language who also feels weak writing in that language, I empathize and sympathize with you. I'd like to write a version of that idea up if that's ok with you. I definitely have a work set in college, so it's no a big leap to do this storyline. Plus I like collaborating with other authors.

12/30/25, 4:37 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Thank you for understanding. As for the collab offer, I feel honored. However, I think I would need to lay out some more contexts to my story first before I let other people put their hands on it. My concern is going to be consistency since I do have few plans for my stories already. I like to enjoy a well-knitted, well-tied, and cohesive stories, and I am driven to write that way. That being said tho... I think by the next chapter I will have enough boundaries set, which will open the gate for those who want to write in the same world I am building. It is coming! I am close!
Anonymous
12/27/25, 8:33 PM
Hot! And congrats for submitting your first story! I think the story is really hot. I like your slow burn. My advice however, can you tone down a little your seemingly endless adjectives when you describe something? Sometimes people in this site does not need a vivid or phoetic description. Sometimes they just want you to make them horny.

12/30/25, 4:24 AM
@Anonymous Hey.. I know you... =.= (I think, If I'm wrong and you catch a stray, I am sorry) ( thanks anyway for the support, I'll do what I can :) )
12/30/25, 4:03 AM
Fucking Hot story!:fire::sweat_drops::eggplant: More please? _**this message was written out on 12/29/25, at 11:03 PM**_
12/30/25, 3:51 AM
Reaaaallllly loved the chastity element. Would love to see a sequel about either Seth or Brett doing the shrinking with Dr. Jones' friend!
12/30/25, 2:01 AM
Such a hot story! I love the descriptions of the training and then the time you spend showing us the way the main character's thoughts have completely changed. Hoping we get to see this gangbang!
staci39Z1
12/30/25, 12:13 AM
Wow... Truly amazing
Jul 2, 2025
9/13/25, 12:54 AM
This one is going to be living in my head rent-free for a while.

12/29/25, 7:26 PM
@[xXxMonsterFuckerxXx](/user/show/83490) I hope it still is. Pump it dumb bro!
Jul 2, 2025
Anonymous
7/2/25, 2:58 PM
I liked the story, but the slur at the very end caught me off guard and took me out of it a bit-

7/2/25, 3:20 PM
@Anonymous I’m sorry to hear that. Which one though?

7/4/25, 5:08 AM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) The R word. People use it meaning stupid, the word is used against neurodivergent people

12/29/25, 7:24 PM
@[Kent-1](/user/show/10001096) To me it's a word that very effectively conveys the sense of deep mental degradation caused by the chanting and subsequent masturbation. Nothing but cock thoughts. No concepts but penis and penis pleasure. Their minds aren't supressed. They aren't merely mentally stymied. Their minds are totally annihilated by the chanting and the link created between penis and brain once they succumb. They are cast back into a state of primitive, instinct dominated cockhood. They are dong drones and their entire concept of being has been reduced to penis and penis pleasure. I couldn't think of a word tat better conveys that. It's also a word seen quite commonly within the gooning community. It's used in intentionally degrading goon caps and audio and video files but also just to convey the depth of the goon state some committed penis slaves can reach. So I say get pumping bro! Wrap your fist round that gift of a dong and stroke your brains out! Don't just get dumb on Penis. Get fucking R on needy, leaky, greasy cock!
Jul 2, 2025
Drone01
7/16/25, 8:53 PM
I always wonder what the women in these scenarios are doing, like you kinda think that maybe they are trying to stop the spreading

12/29/25, 6:54 PM
@Drone01 I often wonder the same thing. This story was partly inspired by one where the chanting caused the women to run away and consciously separate themselves from the men. In another one they hear the memetic device and then promptly exit stage left, as if they have disappeared, or more likely one of the effects of the chant is that men can no longer even conseptualise women. If you're looking for a logical explanation I suppose you can use either one. Different people having a different reaction to the chant. Perhaps also the women simply hear different words and also end up masturbating? “Rub! Rub! Rub it dumb! Rub! Rub! Until you cum!” Ultimately I don't tend to include mention of women because I don't think I'd write a particularly authentic explanation of their sexual experiences and I do want my readers to focus solely on the masculine experience. On the unifying commonality of penis, penis masturbation, m-m sex or mind control from the male perspective. Including female characters can sometimes interrupt that I think. At least for me.
Jul 2, 2025
7/8/25, 7:33 PM
Best goon story I have ever read! When im unlocked Im definitely coming right back haha

12/29/25, 6:37 PM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) That's a huge compliment coming from you! I hope you remembered to cum back when you unlocked :smiling_imp: