Recent Comments

10/22/25, 3:37 AM
Good start of a story with lots of potential. The induction was interesting, but might have been hotter and more convincing if the physiological techniques initially used to diminish the target's state of consciousness were more fully described and explained. I understand that sounds and light can be used to affect one's consciousness, but don't really understand how they are used. I can't believe that just a short walk down the hall would be sufficient to have much effect. How was the technician not affected? Were the eye drops used for dilation also drugged? I think the story might have been hotter (for me at least) to have covered all that in more detail. Nevertheless the circumstance was quite original. I enjoyed the story a lot!
10/16/25, 8:11 AM
I feel like there's a few changes that we didn't see Alex type into the typewriter..

10/22/25, 12:21 AM
@[Zi19](/user/show/922060) I hope not. Can you point them out?

10/22/25, 12:46 AM
@[CdJenny](/user/show/10005373) Like what made Dave's ass began to change? Why is his jaws softening and his hips starting to curve?

10/22/25, 3:18 AM
@[Zi19](/user/show/922060) Thank you. Fixed, just gotta wait for mods to publish it
10/22/25, 2:14 AM
Please Sir I want some more. 🙏
10/20/25, 8:55 PM
Such a hot series

10/22/25, 1:30 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) I'm certainly trying my best with it
10/21/25, 9:48 AM
Damn this story is hot

10/22/25, 1:16 AM
@[msplatx](/user/show/10033164) Glad to hear!
10/21/25, 9:47 PM
Great chapter! Kinda hoping he ends up with the daddy orc

10/22/25, 1:16 AM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Just have to stay tuned and see if he does
10/21/25, 11:19 PM
I can't even think straight after reading this. I'm in heat myself I guess. It's true, you feel bad for Eli. But there's so many moments of newfound joy. You've taken kinks I've only glanced over and made them new and itchy. Like his hole, poor guy.

10/22/25, 1:16 AM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) Always good to hear, hopefully you continue to enjoy the story as it goes
10/21/25, 6:55 PM
Wish this author would post more than one chapter. What’s I see from there previous stories they just leave and move on

10/22/25, 12:21 AM
@[msplatx](/user/show/10033164) I only add chapters based on demand. If there is 0 comments under a story requesting another chapter i move on to a new story. My next story is my best one yet and you will love it. Should be published by mid November
10/21/25, 6:36 AM
Amazing chapter and such a cliffhanger! Can’t wait for the final chapter 🔥

10/22/25, 12:05 AM
@[Patrick3](/user/show/10059155) And thank you for all the support you've given the series!