Recent Comments

2/28/26, 9:33 AM
OK, truth be told, Chapter 5 left me preparing to abandon the whole enterprise. The pace was frenetic and your like for quick transformations was in hyper drive. But as Bill said: " I’m not going to pretend it doesn’t turn me on.” Yet, something seemed off in your writing. I was getting stressed out because you seemed to have turned against your characters. I went back to Chapter 5 and reread it and still felt something was misfiring. Then, came Chapter 6 which came like the transformation it was meant to be. The pace was, slow and romantic. The characters were humanized even while living a fantasy. The mood was mellow. You got me to love Bill's easy charm. With the expanded length, you even made Stench more interesting human. Chapter 5 and 6 are clearly the work of the same person, but Chapter 5 seemed to be written out of duty. Chapter 6 taps into something personal and as a result it put the story back on track, at least for me. Chapter 6 reads like a complete story in and of itself, and is a solid piece of composition in any genre. It's too late to change the narrative of speedy transformations for this story, but I'm convinced that you can achieve a great story keeping things on the plane of reality, not magic. Keep it up. You're a wild ass of a talent that expect to produce some classic queer tales.

2/28/26, 12:42 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) Thanks for taking the time to write out what you were thinking. I will put some thought into how best to rewrite Chapter 5 and slow it down, get into the characters’ heads. Looking at it now, yeah, I can see how it felt rushed. Thanks again!
2/27/26, 10:06 PM
Your story fullfill my deepest desire to have a pussy instead of my useless microdick. Although I know it will always be just a dream, this wonderful, positive love story allowed me to believe in it for a while, and for that, I am grateful. I hope to have the chance to read more of your stories!

2/28/26, 10:12 AM
@[LowDesertDad](/user/show/10069349) So glad you enjoyed it. I've got a number of stories on here, none of them exactly the same... mainly because I've tried to nail the fantasy in one go and not feel like I need to keep returning to it. But there are definitely ones about being a big muscle bottom with a tiny dick and loving it., and there are ones about being a fit muscle bro and being transferred into a woman's body with a real life pussy... I think you might enjoy those too.
Willie Cici
2/28/26, 3:32 AM
Loved the first chapter. Can't wait for the next.
2/26/26, 4:30 PM
I love the slow transformation, how he fights yet is accepting of his role. How horny and correct it’s making him feel. Would be amazing if he learnt how to chauffeur

Anonymous
2/28/26, 3:30 AM
@[ArcherUK](/user/show/2248631) Agreed - especially with the right hat! (or maybe full traditional uniform)
2/28/26, 2:41 AM
Applying gender stereotypes to bedroom roles is so hot, and this is a really well-written setup to boot. STOKED to see where this goes.
2/28/26, 12:23 AM
Just marking me checking in to see if theres a new chapter! I'm so excited for the next one!
2/27/26, 9:47 PM
Can't wait for more
2/27/26, 11:07 AM
I absolutely adore this story - so hot and well written! Can't wait to see what depravity Roger sinks to next

2/27/26, 9:05 PM
@[Shakey J](/user/show/38013) Thanks for reading! The next chapter is likely going to be the last, but it will go out with a bang.
Peter
2/16/26, 3:32 PM
Thank you for writing such a hot story! I‘m so happy this is finally utilised properly. I can‘t wait for the next chapter! You‘ve actually got me wondering if Keldric will serve as Miraak‘s vessel in Solstheim, like let Miraak control his body as if it were Miraak‘s own, after they physically meet in Aprocrypha and Keldric swear allegiance to him. After, all Miraak would be able to use any shout he wants from Keldric‘s body while staying physically within Apocrypha.

2/18/26, 12:51 PM
@Peter Thanks for praise! "I‘m so happy this is finally utilised properly." - I just couldn't find any stories about Miraak here, and I was like, “What the hell! This is the best material for a hypno-story!” So I decided to write my own story. As for your theory about the plot... It's interesting. But who knows how it will all turn out? Me? Yeah. Will I tell you? Nah. :hand_over_mouth:

Peter
2/18/26, 4:16 PM
@[JackBright963](/user/show/10067777) Thanks for your reply. My plot theory would feature Keldric submitting to Miraak more than any other way possible: letting Miraak use his body (and mind) as his own. Just saying: depending on the development I may wish to write from a branching off point a different version…would you be ok with that?

2/26/26, 12:33 PM
@Peter Damn, how did I miss this? "Just saying: depending on the development I may wish to write from a branching off point a different version…would you be ok with that?" Well, sure. Just make a some cosmetic changes tho. And give me credit at the end, okay? 'Cause it'll be weird that two accounts are telling the same story, and people might get confused.

علاء
2/26/26, 5:25 PM
@Peter هاي صديقي

Peter
2/26/26, 5:31 PM
@[JackBright963](/user/show/10067777) That seems fine. Can you give one or more examples of cosmetic changes? I‘m not completely sure what you mean there.

2/27/26, 2:51 PM
@Peter Well, change couple of details? Like, other armour, for example, or the name or details of the journey to the temple. I don't know, you're going to be writing an addition to the story, so it's up to you what changes you will make. I'm not a guide to good stories, just another enthusiast. :sweat_smile:

Peter
2/27/26, 6:50 PM
@[JackBright963](/user/show/10067777) Thank you! I shall let you know when I write anything.
2/27/26, 5:44 PM
Love the series you create. Can’t wait for more