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12/12/25, 2:06 AM
Wow, just wow!🤯😛😛😛
Peanut
12/11/25, 11:00 PM
This is so cool!
12/11/25, 10:28 PM
I love this story! I am now reading this for the second time and I am just as captivated this time as the first time. I am loving a systemic corruption of 4 males; each falling as In a line of dominoes with three on the back of one however these strapping males all have gotten their sexuality set to bi-but mainly men; oh and certain type of relationship. I'm looking forward to Jaxk fulfilling his dreams of being a good boy for daddy. With his brothers joining in. But who i engineering this family's corruption. I'm guessing it's Dan. Dom Dan! Thanks I'm enjoying this all over again!
12/11/25, 9:11 PM
Amazing story, great universe. Looking forward to reading more stories from you
11/28/24, 1:11 PM
One of my favourites now, I keep re-reading it :joy:

12/11/25, 8:21 PM
@[Kink Author](/user/show/10050299) Oooh I love this. Keep going, boy
@TinyDSF from X
12/11/25, 4:04 AM
one of the hottest stories i've read in awhile, made me cum so hard. wuld love more stories like this,

12/11/25, 6:42 PM
@@TinyDSF from X heck yeah, thanks for reading ;)
9/17/22, 7:52 PM
Statement withdrawn

9/17/22, 8:18 PM
@Stroppy Author Hello, thank you very much for commenting, all comments and constructive criticism are welcome and I appreciate them very much. First of all, it means a lot to me that you think it's well written. Being English my non-native language, I try very hard to do quality work for all of you, and I'm glad to know you think so. Oh, man, I’m surprised, I honestly didn't think the story was so dark and hopeless! I thought I'd managed to make clear Kyle’s guilty pleasure he’s experiencing, and that a big part of what's happening to him is so tortuous, because in some degree that he refuses to admit to himself, he's actually enjoying in part what's going on, and that he’s definitely having the best sex he ever had. That was my intention in chapter 12 with the meeting of the three Kyles: the conflict between his morality, his reality and his animal instincts. I'm sorry I have not been clear on that. This is my first story, so I totally accept that it may have flaws like that. And in fact some of what you’re saying (the enjoyment of the victims) appears better explores in chapter 14, which I’m already working on. But of course I take the criticism, and I respect your decision not to continue reading it. I will keep all of that in mind. Again, thanks a lot for the feedback, buddy!

11/30/25, 1:26 PM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) It's a pity there is no continuation 😔 Is it possible to read this story somewhere? Do you publish it in your language anywhere?

@Plymouth58
12/3/25, 1:29 AM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) Hi! I'm so sorry I haven't been able to continue the story. It's incredible that so much time has passed; it's the biggest writer's block I've ever had. The worst part is, I know how the story goes, I know what I want to write, but I've reached the point where I'm bogged down in a major plot point, and I'm terribly stuck. I think being left to write alone without any extra support is what got me stuck. I must have written a dozen variations already, but it's really complicated because the story keeps going in the wrong direction. Believe me, I'm trying to get back on track, but oh, it's so difficult! The job change from employee to freelancer hasn't made things any easier either; I used to write on my way to work. I'm still working on the next chapterl, but I can't seem to develop talk between Terry and T-Bone properly. It's really the ending of the first act and the start of the second one, where things get terribly out of control for the heroes, so it had to be made well. I'm confident that by fixing that, I'll be able to continue.

12/11/25, 5:51 PM
@@Plymouth58 Forget the story, man. I'm just glad you're ok. I thought you were a late case of Covid. I hope you stay well.
Dec 11, 2025
12/11/25, 12:44 PM
Very hot! Hope Clark enjoys his prize

12/11/25, 5:40 PM
@[Gcub4](/user/show/10000534) Clark is a rogue. Definitely showing these two how to LIVE!
Dec 11, 2025
12/11/25, 8:24 AM
I feel bad for Dave. He will never get Steve back

12/11/25, 5:39 PM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) You might be surprised. It may not be in the way either of them had originally intended. I have a second installment in the works.
12/10/25, 5:48 AM
Another great chapter, Soren! I know you've been working on this for a long time, so it's great to finally see all those ideas come to fruition and light! I'm really interested in Hunter's arc and seeing where his feelings take him in the story, especially with this Hunt that Hawk has been planning! Really great job balancing the numerous perspectives, as well as continuing to pepper in the worldbuilding without being too much! Good work, Soren! :smiley:

12/11/25, 5:17 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thanks so much! I was worried about the multiple perspectives--this was my first major foray into multiple perspectives, and I'm glad it's working well. The Hunter arc is one of my favourites in this story, I hope it'll satisfy.