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JustAthought
10/29/25, 7:49 PM
I wonder if people would have found the story just as hot if there was a colour/ethnicity swap (asian dom, black sub for example). If it would change the hotness it would definitely say something.

12/17/25, 10:29 AM
@JustAthought Interesting thought. i am a submissive white bottom boy. i love diversity; i think all the differences between races, enthnicities, and cultures make life more interesting. For some reason i relish submitting to and serving Men of other races, ethnicities and/or cultures from myself. While i would be happy with the opportunity to serve most Dominant Men, i innately and unconsciously put myself in a story as a white submissive/slave. Naturally though i also have aesthetic and other psychological preferences. First my general interest in diversity also applies more specifically to men different from myself. Thus i tend to prefer stories in which the Dom is non-white and the submissive is white. That said i find it fairly easy to focus on the aspects of a story which most arouse me and mostly ignore others. So if the sub in the story was some race other than white, i might simply ignore that aspect of the story. i suppose the bottom line to your question is: a color/ethnicity swap might affect my enjoyment of a story to some extent. So, JustAthought, if you asked that question about a swap, you must have thought about your own answer to that question. i wonder why you didn't offer your personal thoughts about your own response. ;)
12/17/25, 9:50 AM
Thanks LockedPig for such hot story. Great ending that left me wishing for WAY more. A real shame that it's ended. Maybe a spin off? Pretty Please????
Apr 11, 2021
Anonymous
12/17/25, 9:49 AM
Still waiting this saga
Jakey
12/17/25, 8:54 AM
So amazing! Continuously arousing as every scene built and more and more men fell into the service of our demonic lord!
12/10/25, 1:41 AM
If you ever decide to write more, I'd love a chapter of turning the tables, giving some justice to Alan, freeing him again (and a payback for Oscar, though I can understand why he'd want to escape this fate). Then again, I'm a sucker for good endings, so that's just me

12/17/25, 8:51 AM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Interesting reaction. In my mind there was no 'good' ending to this story.
12/17/25, 8:49 AM
i normally love stories which center around a submissive's loss of control. Strangely enough even though i think this whole custom of creating non-consenting drones who remain aware of their unwanted and immoral treatment, the concept as a fantasy is still surprisingly somewhat arousing. While on the surface the loss of control is quite hot, it is interesting that for me the more immoral a story's concept, the less i enjoy the story and the less likely i am to come back to it. In my mind in a good BDSM relationship, both Dom and submissive, and even in the more extreme case of Master and slave(s), every participant must get something positive out of the relationship. In this case i see nothing positive for the drones at all for the rest of their lives. For me the sadness of this situation overrides my libido.
12/17/25, 7:50 AM
I have to ask. In this world what is the true benefit of being a sub? Are they permanently subs or will they work their way up to being a norm again. I fail to see why anyone would choose to be a sub and be used by others without a massive payout at some point. What is the advantage for companies to hire subs? I understand they are a source of stress relief for staff/execs at Silver level but what happens at Gold level? There has to be some benefit for the sub for this to work. I have a vague understanding of Dom/Sub interactions but the legal and economic issues of this world are not clear. I understand some people are drawn to being Doms and Subs here on Earth but in this world/company it is a business opportunity so I assume there is some corporate advancement from being a sub? This world does not make sense to me. Why would Steve bear so much abuse? Is it just to help Mark rise through the ranks? What does Steve ultimately get in this situation? I read all 17 parts and I'm still confused. It was an enthralling well written story but I still have questions.
MusclesWizard
12/17/25, 7:31 AM
God I wish I was a good boy! Love this story.
12/17/25, 5:02 AM
Such a great story! This is building up to an insanely hot series. So many questions still remain... will he make more cursed wishes? Will someone else's cursed wishes impact him unexpectedly? How will Leo become more involved? Can't wait to find out those answers!
12/17/25, 4:39 AM
Such a great series. Really enjoyed this from start to finish. I think you did a great job of keeping things fresh and exciting as it went along, and I enjoyed how you brought it together in the end. Super hot, so many sexy scenes that each part had me edging throughout.