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10/27/25, 4:37 AM
I liked it more than I initially thought I would. Definitely like the relationship between Lope and the narrator. Chapter two when?
10/27/25, 3:23 AM
Great chapter, loved it! Loved that the conversation/modification process was entirely natural (they don’t know what Oby does, after all) and didn’t turn into “you love ‘x’ and you will do ‘y’” if that makes sense

10/27/25, 3:49 AM
@[italianstalian1987](/user/show/2658220) Thanks for noticing :grin: Exactly what I was going for, just regular people making love with maybe Kendrick nudging the father and son along a bit.
Jack Paris
10/27/25, 3:41 AM
Great story line. Very clever idea. I keep picturing Gene Hackman saying Lex Luthor's lines!
10/27/25, 1:17 AM
I liked this one, a lot! Fun, creative, well-written, with a bit of body horror, for sure, but nothing too over the top for my taste. Tying it together as a police investigation towards the end was a great framing technique. Good work!
Anonymous
10/27/25, 12:34 AM
What happened to this? No more continuation 🥹
Anonymous
10/27/25, 12:15 AM
I'm here for Viktor 🥹 where is Viktor 🥹
10/26/25, 11:15 PM
I love this series Hope that you write more of it
10/26/25, 10:05 PM
Heiße Träume!
10/26/25, 9:07 PM
I just discovered the series and I'm really intrigued what it's going to happen!
Oct 26, 2025
10/26/25, 9:01 PM
A fascinating and hot read!