Recent Comments

Gaz
1/10/26, 10:41 AM
Hey I really like your writing style, and I love a game reality change story. It’s obvious you have a clear idea who your characters are. As a reader, I’m finding it hard to keep 9 characters in my head. Also, with a choose your own adventure style, you may want to publish a block/thread of chapters at the same time. This is possible using the “Publish on” field. You can select a date more than 7 days from when you publish them (giving the volunteer approval team time to do their magic). Just a suggestions, keep writing, can’t wait to see where this is heading.

1/11/26, 2:19 PM
@[Gaz](/user/show/365297) Really super appreciate this; 9 is a bit much isn't it...hoping to create enough isolating/individualized situations to keep 'em all relevant and cohesive; also hoping to emphasize dif characters and dynamics w/ the many dif story strands...will def keep you readers in mind tho :) That's a great publishing idea (like holy tysm); much is already written so will def employ this! Hope you enjoy
1/11/26, 1:38 PM
Ooh i like that he madr Alfred stronger and daddier.
1/11/26, 1:17 PM
Thanks very much for your likes, ratings and messages of support. Where possible, I try to take your suggestions onboard, so Alex the next chapter is entitled 'Submissive Smoking' and has just been sent off for publishing on 11 January, so hopefully it will be ready ready to read by the 15th. Titan is one of the great innovators and story-tellers on this site, so please enjoy his work, if you haven't already!
Jan 9, 2026
Elm
1/11/26, 4:16 AM
It's a neat first try I think, I can certainly feel the enthusiasm! And I VERY much like the themes :3 Above all, thanks for sharing! Believe me I get how hard it can be.
1/11/26, 1:24 AM
Damn what a chapter. Why do i want Agent Tony to be part of his "family" aswell. Maybe he could be a below or slave by Farrow and then Farrow would be back. And wow, that gym scene is so hot. I wonder who snitched about the giant orgy. Maybe a passerby or late student/audience saw whats happening and freaked out. And so Ethan does bottom. So maybe a shapeshifted Derek or Farrow would top him that would be hot. And for his family, and the implications of them being released from his manipulation, i wonder what would happen if Ethan escapes. Hmm.
1/8/26, 11:06 AM
Would be fun to the class take a trip to visit a slave processing centre, maybe the new slaves could feel what it’s like to be properly processed into permanent slaves… jus to give them a taste

1/11/26, 1:04 AM
@[Readytochange](/user/show/240124) agreed i would love that.
1/10/26, 11:06 PM
Great and well-written story, thank you. Hot too. As a submissive myself who has experimented with chastity cages I could relate to it. Look forward to future chapters.
1/9/26, 12:54 AM
Your story really gets me going!! I have read it several times over the last several days. Each read I get rock solid & can not help cumming. I am glad your story is not cursed like the video!

1/9/26, 1:30 AM
@[3684](/user/show/10054325) awww, i love to hear that. thanks for reading. and multiple times, wow! 🪄🪄🪄

1/10/26, 12:30 AM
@[Sorcerer-Boy](/user/show/10014733) Could your arm be twisted to write more about the cursed video? I would love to read more!! Whether about Chris, the current victim, or others who watch the video. It’s a very erotic piece!!!

1/10/26, 7:39 PM
@[3684](/user/show/10054325) That's very kind! If I had infinite time (or infinite money), I'd get to spend more time on this stuff. But alas. Much other writing and working to be done :(
1/10/26, 2:58 PM
I really like how the rubber is also being used a a form of chastity and edging during his enforced absentince. And with the constant references to his rubber pouch make me speculate if a null bulge will be used later.

Anonymous
1/10/26, 5:53 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thanks a lot for that. The story is indeed written with the objective in mind to edge to be frustratingly slow at first but then gets you addicted to continue nonetheless.
1/10/26, 3:51 PM
I love the idea here, but the pace is slow and the writing gets repetitive.

Anonymous
1/10/26, 5:52 PM
@[Dubbel](/user/show/913842) I get that feeling and won't tell you to not think like that because I felt the same. But as the story continues you'll see it continues with more pace and gives us different angles. It's the first time I tried to write a longer story and got aroused myself at that slow speed though. Usually I just rush way too quickly