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2/27/26, 9:47 PM
Can't wait for more
2/27/26, 11:07 AM
I absolutely adore this story - so hot and well written! Can't wait to see what depravity Roger sinks to next

2/27/26, 9:05 PM
@[Shakey J](/user/show/38013) Thanks for reading! The next chapter is likely going to be the last, but it will go out with a bang.
Peter
2/16/26, 3:32 PM
Thank you for writing such a hot story! I‘m so happy this is finally utilised properly. I can‘t wait for the next chapter! You‘ve actually got me wondering if Keldric will serve as Miraak‘s vessel in Solstheim, like let Miraak control his body as if it were Miraak‘s own, after they physically meet in Aprocrypha and Keldric swear allegiance to him. After, all Miraak would be able to use any shout he wants from Keldric‘s body while staying physically within Apocrypha.

2/18/26, 12:51 PM
@Peter Thanks for praise! "I‘m so happy this is finally utilised properly." - I just couldn't find any stories about Miraak here, and I was like, “What the hell! This is the best material for a hypno-story!” So I decided to write my own story. As for your theory about the plot... It's interesting. But who knows how it will all turn out? Me? Yeah. Will I tell you? Nah. :hand_over_mouth:

Peter
2/18/26, 4:16 PM
@[JackBright963](/user/show/10067777) Thanks for your reply. My plot theory would feature Keldric submitting to Miraak more than any other way possible: letting Miraak use his body (and mind) as his own. Just saying: depending on the development I may wish to write from a branching off point a different version…would you be ok with that?

2/26/26, 12:33 PM
@Peter Damn, how did I miss this? "Just saying: depending on the development I may wish to write from a branching off point a different version…would you be ok with that?" Well, sure. Just make a some cosmetic changes tho. And give me credit at the end, okay? 'Cause it'll be weird that two accounts are telling the same story, and people might get confused.

علاء
2/26/26, 5:25 PM
@Peter هاي صديقي

Peter
2/26/26, 5:31 PM
@[JackBright963](/user/show/10067777) That seems fine. Can you give one or more examples of cosmetic changes? I‘m not completely sure what you mean there.

2/27/26, 2:51 PM
@Peter Well, change couple of details? Like, other armour, for example, or the name or details of the journey to the temple. I don't know, you're going to be writing an addition to the story, so it's up to you what changes you will make. I'm not a guide to good stories, just another enthusiast. :sweat_smile:

Peter
2/27/26, 6:50 PM
@[JackBright963](/user/show/10067777) Thank you! I shall let you know when I write anything.
2/27/26, 5:44 PM
Love the series you create. Can’t wait for more
2/27/26, 5:29 PM
Great story. Well developed characters. I like how the plot slowly evolved. Nice heat too.
Andi
2/15/25, 9:19 AM
Theory: the fat man game that abe won at the beginning of the story was a previous victim. This hypnotist keeps adding humans turned into objects to the carnival.

Anonymous
2/27/26, 5:22 PM
@Andi 🤔
Anonymous
2/27/26, 4:41 PM
Holy cow haven’t been this excited for a story start in a long time! Love the cliff hanger ending and can’t wait to see where it goes in the next chapter
2/27/26, 4:27 PM
How am I only now discovering your stories? This is extremely hot.
2/27/26, 1:34 PM
got me interested in seeing where this is going
2/27/26, 11:12 AM
GH ID - 1493566 I hope that Obsidian Seph will be easy to get just by defeating villains, because he's my favorite muscular bottom character.