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5/31/23, 3:52 PM
Absolutely fantastic sign me up 😍
5/31/23, 2:05 PM
I get it's not ok but I would have liked to see Skippy try to explain himself. He is a very sheltered homophobic person at the start and that might be the only term he go l could know and also didn't think it was wrong to pry. Still get punished but could have tried to talk his way out of it. I still love the progression on the story and can't wait to read the next chapter.
5/31/23, 11:06 AM
This is such a great, hot story, but my god the typos can take you out of it.
5/31/23, 8:43 AM
Yeah, a slow build, but a good one. You're sucking me into the characters and story line.
5/31/23, 7:33 AM
I like this series! Would love to see more public humiliation, too, but the findom stuff is hot. The end "got me" ;)
Anonymous
5/31/23, 7:10 AM
Will there ever be a similar series based on Hungarian? Btw this was so Hot and Sexy
5/31/23, 5:55 AM
I'm glad to see this series keep going on.
5/30/23, 1:13 AM
will there be another chapter?

5/31/23, 3:33 AM
@[midwest_hypnosis](/user/show/925698) Yes. On the back burner for now but I’m thinking about this story a lot
HypnoMuttHero
5/31/23, 2:30 AM
Stunning from start to finish. Can't say enough good things about the story and your prowess as a writer. You've drawn a rich universe of characters here, and I'm not eager to see them go... Thank you so much.
5/31/23, 1:23 AM
Before anything, I want to say that last chapter was really amazing! I was working up a comment for it but didn't get around to making it because I figured I had at least a month before the next update. It honestly gave me vibes reading it that I hadn't felt since first getting into reading MC fiction. That said, you can definitely tell this was a preplanned ending. I wouldn't go so far as to call it disjointed because it still flows pretty well but it definitely feels like their a disconnect between this chapter and the last one, especially in the relationship between Uri and Freddy. Like, it feels really weird for Freddy to just suddenly realize he's never going to get through to Uri after Uri just basically tried to completely change him into his personal dom top boytoy against his will. The last wish in general feels like it's downplayed after how darkly it was played last chapter, I'm not that surprised that Freddy was able to free himself more easily than he realized but while Bryant probably likes it way more than Freddy did it definitely feels weird that Freddy isn't at least a little concerned about what he did to Bryant or that he thinks about how he did a pretty good job as a dom top. I still really liked the series overall and I definitely understand how when you have an ending in mind it can be really hard to match things up when the story starts moving in more or different directions than your initial plans (and this one is especially impressively long) but this little wrinkle does color the ending for me at least a little. I'm excited to see whatever it is you work on next. Thank you for sharing this story with us over this past year!
May 12, 2018
5/31/23, 12:25 AM
Like omg, I can never get enough of this story. So turns me on, on so many ways
5/30/23, 11:51 PM
Loved the story Also, wanna admit, totally fell for those false links..
5/30/23, 11:40 PM
Another hot chapter! Seeing Hank's gradual descent into Coach's trap is going to be a lot of fun. So much for you to play with there! As for Brody, as his fate gets more sealed and his reality more and more inescapable, it looks like he is going to find himself enduring more humiliation and with an unruly boner that just adds to his problems.
May 29, 2023
5/30/23, 11:24 PM
Fun start! You packed a lot in there. Maybe as Jason gets the hang of diary writing, he describes things a bit more. For example: "He told me that working out nude is actually super healthy for you, cause like, clothes like trap all that sweat and you carry it with you the whole day and like that stops your muscles from growing. Broo, I had no idea!" Does Jason sweat a lot? Does he wear loose or tight clothes? If he's working out naked, what does the vinyl on the bench press feel like? Does anything happen when he's doing certain kinds of weight-lifting exercises, like squats or curls? Does coach rub the sweat in or wipe it off with a towel while Jason is lifting? You've got several erotic and humiliating scenes that you could draw out further, if you want to. The more we hear dumb Jason talk, the more fun it is for us!
TimLeaf
5/29/23, 3:20 PM
Hey everyone, Thank you for reading / rating my story. That's supposed to be the first part of a serie, let me know if I should write a part 2 of this serie :) .

Anonymous
5/30/23, 10:55 PM
@[TimLeaf](/user/show/10013470) It's great, can't wait for Part 2, although I hope u don't make him turn into a pig, maybe some size loss, orgasm control/denial
5/30/23, 9:46 PM
Another great chapter! Hope there’s more to come!
5/30/23, 2:19 AM
Matt is definitely smarter than he lets on. And if (more like when) he plays his cards right with this hunt, Jake is going to be bound to him on several levels. And the looming threat of what Billy would do to him is going to play right into Matt's hands.

5/30/23, 3:36 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) That’s an interesting theory…we’ll have to see!

5/30/23, 9:28 PM
@[SlaveBoyJG](/user/show/10017787) It would be a great way to cement their 'relationship'. Or maybe he will come to rescue if another hunter gets him. But I might be just as wrong. Maybe somehow Billy and Callum will catch him. The idea of permanent chastity for a slave is a hot one. Maybe even Jake will experience what its like being rubber slave. And thank you btw for being so consistent in publishing your chapters. This is really appreciated.
5/30/23, 8:40 PM
WOWOWOW! This is the BEST concept and the sexiest story. Its just decadent and just so well written. Keep em coming!
5/30/23, 11:00 AM
This looks like a start of something so awesome! But I must have missed something - like which celebrity they looked like? May I know?

5/30/23, 7:42 PM
@[Aikuchi](/user/show/13555) Thank you! Logan looks like Jensen Ackles and Cole looks like Chace Crawford. Both younger versions, because this is a college setting lmao.
5/30/23, 6:50 PM
Please do keep going! Excellent read
5/30/23, 6:33 PM
Ich lebe um dem Virus zu dienen!
5/30/23, 5:32 PM
Thank you so much for the great work! As always, each new chapter was well worth the wait. This has been a very pleasant big-sub-small-top read for me (for many others too I'm sure), and I'm looking forward to the next one from you. Thanks again AvionneX !
5/29/23, 8:41 PM
I frickin love this! I do wish I could see a chapter of him going through with gettin the jewels removed, but eh, its still stupid hot!

5/30/23, 5:24 PM
@[Stargazer](/user/show/10027972) I'm very sorry, I'm afraid I won't be able to provide such content.
5/30/23, 3:58 PM
Excellent start. Any news on when the next chapter will be posted?
5/30/23, 10:27 AM
Here is a thought. How would Jake react to a shrinkage in his cock, taking away his one last tie to being an alpha?

5/30/23, 3:37 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Definitely a hot mental image😈
5/30/23, 3:15 PM
Man, it is so nice to read new chapters of a story I've loved for years!
5/30/23, 1:20 PM
A very intriguing episode. It will be great to see what he does with his new thralls.
5/30/23, 11:28 AM
This was an excellent story. I loved every twist and turn. And it hit all my buttons
5/30/23, 11:23 AM
Easily my favorite part of the story. Could have been multiple chapters in itself.
5/30/23, 11:08 AM
This is such a fun, erotic story -- I read it years ago elsewhere and am so glad to find it again here!