Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/17/24, 4:26 PM
I wish that the story was longer
4/17/24, 3:52 PM
You are the best at these dystopian style stories of unwilling transformation. This had it all for me: rubber suits, boots, helmets, mind-wipes. Please write more!
4/17/24, 3:28 PM
Amazing story. I definitely prefer this end. Thank you for your work on the story!
Anonymous
4/17/24, 3:14 PM
DBZ IS AWESOME!!!
4/17/24, 2:18 PM
That's not bad.
4/17/24, 1:27 PM
That was really fun! Love himbos discovering their love for what they… have no idea is eating ass. These two bottoms seem like they have a good dynamic—hopefully Ozzy has the stamina for both of them!
Ben
4/17/24, 5:05 AM
Another amazingly hot story from one of my favorite authors!!🔥 🔥 🔥

Drake Nightstorm
4/17/24, 12:16 PM
@[Ben](/user/show/10010133) Why thank you!
4/17/24, 6:41 AM
You never cease to amaze and delight. Something tells me you've been on your knees in a born-again church more than once.. your take on the Fundamentalist twist on pride, body shane/worship, Onanism, and what's to the glory of God is uncannily accurate, it took me right back to Vacation Bible School behind the big tree in the parking lot - please don't ever stop writing
4/17/24, 5:50 AM
I've read both of the endings and as I expected, I prefer this ending instead of the other one. In a sense it's also a good ending, since both Kal and Brad got to be happy and got a boyfriend. I wish Brad got to make Kal his slave though. But that's just my kink talking. Thanks for taking the time to write this series! It's been a fantastic ride.
4/17/24, 5:44 AM
This was one of my favorite stories that i had read months ago before joining this site. especially loved sections (the beginning/middle) with Dave having moments of 'gay panic' & reluctance to conform! the other baseball team members of Kevin & Trevor are fine addition too. it's hot, sexy & fun:blush::eggplant: **_this message was written out on 8/17/23_**
4/17/24, 5:24 AM
Love it so far! I'm excited to see what dirty, sexual things they'll do!
Apr 16, 2024
4/17/24, 2:30 AM
Love it and i usally always love your work willie cici
4/17/24, 1:49 AM
Don't you dare tease us and end this story right here
4/17/24, 12:58 AM
This is Hot!
4/16/24, 11:50 PM
Totally never gonna read the bad ending, this was perfect. There's enough pain in the world, I don't need it in my porn.
Anonymous
4/16/24, 12:01 AM
Glad to see you back! That was such a hot Chapter, I just love how Alex makes them degrade themselves while he uses them.

4/16/24, 11:36 PM
@Anonymous Thank you for rour feddback! I'm glad you enjoyed it, please stay tuned for future chapters!
4/16/24, 11:25 PM
Wow. Fantastic start. I hope you do continue. So many possibilities. Like maybe we can get Teddy’s story?
4/16/24, 11:24 PM
Very hot!
Apr 16, 2024
4/16/24, 10:02 PM
The last line is interesting.
4/16/24, 4:56 PM
Ohh, this is very interesting. Im intrigue.

4/16/24, 9:28 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thank you for taking the time to read it.
4/16/24, 9:27 PM
Would be cool to have a version where Brad gets what he wanted
Feb 15, 2024
4/16/24, 9:13 PM
incest tends to skeek me out, but this was well written and turned me on.
4/16/24, 9:03 PM
I echo the other comments, I really enjoyed this but I want it to be longer! I want more transformations.
Apr 16, 2024
4/16/24, 8:46 PM
Great stuff
Art
4/16/24, 7:53 PM
Good story, but it's been months when will you post more?
4/16/24, 7:36 PM
Incredible series. But, I want to point out that there is still room for more in this thread. The choices thread tied up nicely, but there is further potential for this storyline. How does Ethan respond when he learns that Brad is Kal's complete slave? Can Kal be persuaded to set Brad free? Is a free Brad sufficiently changed that he remains as Kal's slave? Does he become Kal's lover? Does Kal take Brad to the gym to let him experience complete sluthood? I would love a chapter that includes Brad experiencing the joy of being a complete muscle slut. Definitely more material if you have any creative urges left for this series.
4/16/24, 7:22 PM
Amazing i loved it very much
4/16/24, 6:29 PM
As I have always wanted to be in a throuple relationship, but took too long to know who I was and since magic isn’t real, I can’t go back. Fantastic ending to what is now my favorite story!
4/16/24, 5:06 PM
Super hot story! I think I know what Mark was holding on to. A great Bonus story!
Ty Bond
4/16/24, 4:14 PM
I read this while in a chastity cage I actually leaked in it just reading your story, I wish there was a ratting above 5 stars. Thank you Master writer.