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Anonymous
7/14/23, 2:37 PM
Fucking hell that was hot! Really excited to see what you’ve got planned for the rest of the story.

7/31/23, 12:45 AM
@Anonymous Thanks! Hope you enjoyed the other parts.
7/14/23, 2:47 PM
This is PHENOMENAL! So excited for what’s to come!!!

7/31/23, 12:44 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Thanks Edlam! It means a lot coming from you. Hope the rest didn't disappoint.
7/16/23, 8:29 PM
Where to start?! There are so many things I enjoyed here :blush: Maybe it would be fair to start with the characters. I loved how you portrayed Gabriel. His angelical features and celestial voice which hide a deeply sinister dominant side. Holding the power to make anyone do his bidding, even to life-threatening extents. Arrogant and narcissistic but with real good reasons. Scary and appealing at equal parts. And then his counterpart, Adam, stoic and just, driven to help others with his wit and knowledge, handsome yet traditionally generic. But being the first man who resists Gabriel's nearly magical charms makes him the most appreciated target. I'm intrigued by the promise of a slow-paced hunt of poor Adam, and the building of his relationship with sinister Gabriel :) And then, the obsession and the sex are SO kinky. I got really worried when Officer Gendron was made to hold his gun. I felt the kind of shiver one gets when in front of a cold and heartless predator. Gabriel lost all his humanity right there, becaming a dominant unemotional creature instead. Kind of reminded me of a mix of Dorian Gray and Marvel's Killgrave. Eerie! But the submission was so intoxicating that I just can ask for more. Great start! Eager to see what comes next :heart:

7/31/23, 12:44 AM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) Thanks Piko. Gabriel doesn't have a lot of morality but you'll notice that when he lets himself care a bit, his cruelty matches the flaws of his victims.
7/18/23, 10:37 PM
Superb! What a sinewy road we're driving! When you think it will go left, you find yourself in a unexpected U-turn. I love that Adam has to face the consequences of his actions, and that he's every time more exposed to his hypocrisy. I like that he's getting closer to his demise and that he has so much to do with it. Love and obsession are sometimes very close, so him obsessing over Gabriel makes all the sense. He can call it revenge, justice, or hurt ego, but in the end Adam's wife is right. Gabriel's permanently in Adam's head. I'll wait to read the third part, but kudos on this very well written and very well thought story :heart:

7/31/23, 12:41 AM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) I'm glad you got into it, Piko. Yeah, Adam doesn't realize how becoming obsessed with Gabriel just keeps Gabriel in his mind.
7/21/23, 1:27 AM
An intriguing thought. If science can cure malaria, why can't they sell a drug like this over the counter? lol

7/31/23, 12:37 AM
@[LarsonF](/user/show/10037194) They do but only in Canada.
7/30/23, 10:28 PM
I approved this, but you may want to consider switching the many many black quotes used for dialogue in the story to quotation marks "like this" -- I think it would make the story easier and more enjoyable for readers to read. As it stands, I found those block quotes really took me out of the flow of the story. This is a fun concept! Nicely done!

7/31/23, 12:23 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Hello, my dear! Thank you so much for your comment. I was really thinking the same when I read again, after publishing. I will mark the cotes "this form" on next chapters. <3

7/31/23, 12:29 AM
@[JotaJ23](/user/show/10036383) Hi Jota! It's also possible to edit this chapter by using the Author and Reviewer panel if you like!

7/31/23, 12:37 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) I'll do that as soon as possible! Thanks! <3
7/31/23, 12:33 AM
Amazing how fast he changed from agent to fuck boy. The wonders of modern science. I'd love access to such a set up and start turning out perfect lovers. The physical transformation was fast but the psychological one was a slow burn.
7/23/23, 7:48 PM
Your stories are some of the best on the site. I hope you continue this story and we will see more chapters.

7/31/23, 12:32 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thanks Zander for the praise! The site caters to a wide range of readers and their kinks, I'm just glad a few of those think my stories are good. This one is a one shot, unfortunately, but you never know.
7/30/23, 9:59 PM
This story was incredibly hot and so well-paced! I really enjoyed the format and the changes toward the beginning. The ending and final escalation felt a little fast for me in comparison, but overall I think the pacing is good, the story and characters are interesting, and Florian is a wonderfully hot Dom.

7/31/23, 12:01 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Thanks for your comment. The final escalation was planned, but I realize I may not have explained it well enough. I have edited the text to make it clearer.

7/31/23, 12:20 AM
@[Mafisto](/user/show/600927) This is very hot stuff! I look forward to reading these additions in context!
7/23/23, 8:32 PM
Glad to see I'm not the only one who finds Linus hot

7/31/23, 12:17 AM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) You're not.
7/23/23, 10:24 PM
Hot little gem! Linus is the cute geek I didn't knew I needed in my fantasies. The rest of the characters are perfectly casted, and the situations are very sexy. My favorite part was Lyle acting all normal as a host while naked and dripping :fire:

7/31/23, 12:16 AM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) Linus slipped into _my_ fantasies from the moment I saw him in a video. He's sneaky like that. And he knows it, the little devil.
7/24/23, 7:47 PM
Hot and fun story. Nice ending, great bit of butt play. Good story!

7/31/23, 12:11 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thanks Heru, you're the authority when it comes to butt play, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
7/25/23, 3:40 AM
That was such a creative way to get the skaters ensnared. I love how the narcissism within them essentially caused the hypnosis. Great work as always!

7/31/23, 12:10 AM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) Thank you so much! I also enjoyed the lack of hard control, that they gave him what he wanted, not because he commanded them to, but because their state led them naturally to it.
7/25/23, 9:41 PM
Great story! Short, sexy, and straight to the point. The models were very good-looking, and believable as skaters. I liked that the more doses they got, the hornier and open to sex they were. Also, it's good that they don't end up living a life of constant addiction :thumbsup:

7/31/23, 12:07 AM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) Thanks Piko! We can't have all the athletes on Speedglide become addicts, they need to be in top shape for all the sex they'll have to provide. No, just a strong urge to buy more is enough.
Nov 1, 2021
7/30/23, 11:26 PM
I can't believe you managed to get so much into so tight a story. That was seriously hot!
Anonymous
7/30/23, 11:12 PM
I live to serve the virus.
7/30/23, 10:47 PM
Hot story and really well written. Great pacing and quite a sexy arc.
Jul 30, 2023
7/30/23, 10:14 PM
Great premise! It's a fun premise and the overwhelming musky cum messing with Lucius's mind is very hot. Kyle seems to have a real problem. I hope he can find a solution to his constant cumming in large volumes.
prettyrickifag@yahoo.com
7/30/23, 10:00 PM
Oh, she sounds so pretty and so happy -- with a man's body and a girl's pussy! She is so lucky to be Taylor's bride and to be able to serve and satisfy him the rest of her life!
7/30/23, 9:43 PM
This concept is a great mix of humor and hot, love it!
Anonymous
7/30/23, 8:41 PM
Still wishing without hope,of another chapter involving the poor slutty Jimmy
7/30/23, 8:05 PM
Love this story . I hope Matthew submits and gives himself to Eddie in the end . 😊
7/30/23, 5:05 PM
Would love to see some Jacob and Jonathon interaction with one another real soon.
Aug 17, 2019
DutchMrE
7/30/23, 4:57 PM
Love the story. Wish there was more.
6/24/23, 10:27 PM
Excelente y el resto pa'cuando

7/30/23, 4:28 PM
@[Anny G.](/user/show/529498) Estoy comenzandoa escribir un nuevo capítulo
Jul 30, 2023
Martin
7/30/23, 2:08 PM
Interesting and promising start! I took the liberty of moving the story to GaySpiral and change the category to "Pheromones". It looks to me like Kyle's cum is so full of pheromones that Lucius' mind doesn't stand a chance :) "Smelly and Stinky" is more for extreme stuff like stinky feet or even scat.
7/30/23, 1:25 PM
Poor Matthew, everyone he turns to ends up being a slave. Maybe he already was enslaved and Eddie was just toying with his food.
7/30/23, 5:30 AM
I hope you'll continue this story. It was very enjoyable and seemed primed for sequels. Especially regarding the pack of well-endowed werewolves that await the protagonist, forbidden to touch themselves and dedicated to the service of their Alpha.

7/30/23, 6:20 AM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) I have every intention of continuing, when the inspiration for it strikes. :)

7/30/23, 12:30 PM
@[Charlie Walker](/user/show/1052782) Very cool. There’s a great implicit tension in the scenario you describe. Many horny hung werewolves, forbidden to touch themselves, competing for Alpha’s time, attention, & ass. What if they’re horny but cannot serve Alpha at a given moment? What if Alpha punishes a bad-packmember, withholding his ass? How do they keep Alpha’s status as an Alpha-Omega a secret from other packs? What will they think of this new small & scrawny stray that Alpha brings home as his favorite? How do they jostle to be the new latest favorite? Lots of great potential for drama & hot hot sex. Looking fwd to the characters/personalities you will create. Bravo!
Martin
7/28/23, 9:42 PM
What a wonderful intriguing and unique story! Thank you for posting this!

7/30/23, 10:38 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks, I'd have never written it if I didn't have somewhere to publish it so thanks for having me!
7/30/23, 10:14 AM
The frat had a bad reputation partly due to them looking down and toying with others, treating them like one-time-used-then-discarded trashes, so Joe getting the dominating attitude and the power to make anyone his bitch doesn't sound like much of a punishment. I hope he would be knocked down a few pegs, like: he can dominate others but when he does the dominating role he can bring climax to others but he himself cannot cum, he is the dom but actually is the one that serves. Beside that, I hope to see Trevor exploring his power more. I have the feeling his power is the most powerful among them. Manipulating desire isn't just making him a bitch, but also making everyone want to have him, possess him, gather around him, making him their pampered boy, holding everyone together. His lost authority may failed him as frat's president but this power might work.