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8/9/19, 3:52 AM
Pup training...it's a wonderful thing and you wrote it well. I could actually smell Steve and then became remorseful that I actually wasn't. I need to go lick a ripe hairy pit after reading this. And a grandpup. I never would have guessed Steve a pup. Bravo!
Anonymous
8/9/19, 2:44 AM
This installment was such a tease!!! The first half was pretty hot with the obliviousness, though! Keep it up, Lytcom!
Anonymous
8/9/19, 1:53 AM
I love this
Anonymous
8/9/19, 1:07 AM
Fantastic!! My long time favorite : )
8/9/19, 12:25 AM
Amazing as always, Abs. So glad you’re still writing.
nerdysuitedbaby
8/9/19, 12:15 AM
Still surprised that Kevin wasn't the one to break out. He had such a hatred and disdain for what would have been his life for a very long time and didn't think it was good just to play along. that was Steve and Steve's lived this life and not wanting to leave it behind. Now they're on separate paths.
8/8/19, 11:21 PM
Awesome story! really hot progression and steamy writing!
8/8/19, 11:11 PM
“What he proves,” GLAAD persists, “is that these days, a president can do absolutely anything he wants, in broad daylight, and get away with it.” This, well, this is interrsting and has some potential. Hehe
8/8/19, 11:09 PM
I like the reality changing focus group idea. In fact I cant help but imagine a dumb straight homophobic muscle man being turned into a smart, business savvy dominant gay man who can easily build harems. Hehe Besides that I'm not a super fan of the whole gay mayor needing to act straight to get elected.
GrowingGeek
8/8/19, 10:33 PM
This is one of my favourite stories, I can't help coming back to it. The mental and physical transformations are really well done, and it's really inventive. Great job Baralai!
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
8/8/19, 8:29 PM
Where can I try out that collar?
8/8/19, 7:45 PM
Extremely interesting and well-written! If it wasn't on this website, I would've assumed this was the first chapter in a mainstream published gay romance novel. I'm excited to see where this goes!
8/8/19, 7:19 PM
> I wish there was a sex scene between Jax and Jerry > Why ISN'T there a sex scene between Jax and Jerry? That's a good question. I don't remember CallMeCrazy's characters having a lot of sex. I remember the transformation itself was often very sexual, but once they became football drones, they knew nothing but the game -- I would argue that they achieved their sexual expression through playing football, too. I haven't read that series in a good long time -- there were a lot of different branches and plot threads -- it's very complex. It would've been fun with Jax and Jerry, as identical twins, to get confused with who they're having sex with and ultimately lose their individual identity. Dog... wasn't this story long enough...?
8/8/19, 7:06 PM
Nice setup! Good characters, great POV, and the promise of some hotness to come. I’d love to read more. Please keep writing.
Anonymous
8/8/19, 6:55 PM
This has always been one of my favourites. I wish there was a sex scene between Jax and Jerry, but over all the progression and development always makes me come back for more.
Dec 13, 2007
Anonymous
8/8/19, 6:43 PM
I remember reading this story when it was on NCMC. I thought it was sadistic then, and I still do. You almost wish Jacob would do the same to David.
Anonymous
8/8/19, 6:35 PM
Love it--beautifully executed twink transformation!
8/8/19, 5:03 PM
This is not going to end well ☹ And damn it Kevin, you're better than this! You've done it before. You even helped Steve to be out. You can do it again!
Anonymous
8/8/19, 4:29 PM
bimbo tf on the horizon :eyes:
Bibimbap
8/8/19, 3:56 PM
Ohhhh!! man, I'm so hooked to this story!! i love it! Maybe is time to fix those "disgusting ugly uniforms"and change them for something very tight, showing those male hot bodies and big hard cocks. I'm imagining one of those sluty fetish cop uniforms, with micro pants-underwear and tall shiny boots. Put more emphasis on the dumbing down process, the submission and twist in Rick's mind is going splendidly!!
Jul 23, 2019
Tass
8/8/19, 3:24 PM
big fan of your stories. great transformation. hope you keep up the good work. would like to see a mohawk for a change. thx
Anonymous
8/8/19, 2:35 PM
Loving this story! Can't wait to see what happens next!
8/8/19, 2:33 PM
Oh wow, this just gets hotter and hotter!
8/8/19, 2:26 PM
That was hot, and interesting way to tell the story (as a big text message to Raul).
8/8/19, 10:43 AM
Thank you! I largely aped the structure that Max Mann used -- although I added a secondary character, where he would usually focus on the familial relationship. I'm neither here nor there with incestual characters but since I was playing in Max Mann's playground, I followed his lead. (I can't imagine saying a line like "impregnate me like you did mom" -- even as I read it again after so many years, that line jumped out at me -- that's SOOOOOO Max Mann.) Glad you enjoyed it!
Anonymous
8/8/19, 8:12 AM
Hope this story continues. Would be nice to see a really slow evolution happening. Also perhaps cool to read how Leo's thoughts 'persuade' him to be more ballsy and what his thoughts and views are during the slow transformation. Pretty hot.
Aug 5, 2019
Anonymous
8/8/19, 7:10 AM
amazing! really hope you write more!
8/8/19, 6:43 AM
@Wesley Bracken - Yes! I'm so glad someone other than me hates that trope. it puts the blame of homophobia on gay men by presuming all homophobes are just self- hating. it's a way for straight people to ignore their own homophobia and the role society plays in maintaining it (and doesn't make any sense mathematically). Worse, it's frigging everywhere. That being says, tropes are just tools, and you use it really well here. it would probably go out on a second draft, but i could easily see the sheriff as bi, or straight but feeling like any close relationship with a guy is "gay" and going to "taint" him. There's definitely something to be said for how homophobia gets in the way of guys forming close friendships.
8/8/19, 6:17 AM
@BlindSeer0 - Honestly, I had more ideas planned for Christine and Michelle in this story, but as it developed, those ideas got sidelined. They have an important part in this, and when I revisit this at some point to construct a second draft, I hope to give them both fuller roles. Trust me, if anyone on here in interested in screeds, it's me. The ages were a little weird in this, I admit, and it's not clear what's happening when or where. But giving too much detail would spoil the surprise I suppose. As for the pulled punch, you mention it here. I hate the trope that "guy is homophobic because they are gay themselves," and when I started this story, I resolved to avoid it as best I could, but it resolved the sheriff's conflict here in the quickest, neatest, and in some ways most satisfying fashion, so I used it. Initially, I wanted the sheriff caught in some odd liminal space, not so much straight or gay as simply overwhelmingly dominant and sexually fascistic towards everyone, but the story was moving in a different direction, and I let it go where it needed to go. It still works, certainly, and has plenty of impact, but it reduces some of the sheriff's complexity that I wanted to build on.
Anonymous
8/8/19, 5:30 AM
hot