Recent Comments

Aug 9, 2019
Anonymous
8/11/19, 12:08 PM
Interesting that you claimed to bang this out today, when it was written at least two months ago.
8/11/19, 11:48 AM
Would love to see where it
Bimarguycnj
8/11/19, 11:13 AM
another good thread Willie , hope u have plans on at least one more here , you usually leave the reader wondering who is behind these type of places , where they turn straight homophobes into gay sluts
8/11/19, 8:50 AM
A continuation of this has Got to be done. It has the potential of being so hot. Especially with the imagined cast.
Anonymous
8/11/19, 7:30 AM
Awesome story
PupHearted
8/11/19, 7:02 AM
Hi, I'm glad you enjoyed the story but I do apologize for the sudden extremely unrealistic turn it took. My next few stories will be more along the lines of traditional hypnosis and I sure hope you read and enjoy them.
Anonymous
8/11/19, 4:34 AM
You're and excellent writer and this was a great story overall. Just didn't hit my kinks in the end. Enjoyed the scent stuff alot, and the pup stuff too. Thank you!
Aug 9, 2019
Anonymous
8/11/19, 4:29 AM
This was great!
Anonymous
8/11/19, 3:44 AM
Its such a sad thing this story is here.
LongtimeFan
8/11/19, 3:43 AM
Brrrr...chilling. Like everyone else, I genuinely despise the mayor. :p I'm also really impressed by your metaphor of the characters' lives being sucked out and literally building up the town--it's a perfect metaphor for how young queer people are expected to give and give and give in exchange for a "normal" life. Brilliant stuff! As a side note, though--and this isn't just about you, Wesley--does anyone else ever get tired of the unbeatable villains that show up in so many stories on this site? Edlam's Alex in the Reeducator series, King Rex over in absman's works, Hypnothrill's vaguely eldritch beings that inevitably corrupt every guy in sight, the new story about the guy with the enchanted signet ring, and--of course!--Mayor Derry. I confess that, unless there is more to the story (like in this tale!), I usually get really bored by the lack of conflict. The bad guy and his completely irresistible hypnotic/brainwashing power are going to win--why keep reading? :( But again, that is a personal preference. Just wondering if anyone else felt the same! Keep writing what YOU want, Wesley--it's amazing stuff.
Anonymous
8/11/19, 3:19 AM
It is too depressing that I want the mayor to be dead.
Tsquared
8/11/19, 3:00 AM
I feel the programming too. Please make a part 2.
8/11/19, 2:44 AM
As you know I'm also a big fan of POLLINATION: THE SERIES (and the stand-alone story as well). There's something about your voice in those stories - like you don't totally identify with Mike Milano because he's too dumb or something, but nevertheless follow his moves. I love it. :) I like this story and wish it was longer. At one point you have a great threat in this one: > After a pollination, the plant is at its weakest and ready to be cut. If a cut isn’t made immediately after a pollination, the plant will become that much stronger, and ultimately, you’ll lose your battle with the creature that develops inside it. But if you retard the growth immediately, you’ll always remain in control. That's such a wonderful temptation to follow what would happen if the plant starts overpowering Puck. In a sense, the plant has overpowered everyone, even if they think they're in control. But it would be fun to get inside a guy who recognizes he's up against something he shouldn't have but wants anyway. Anyway, bravo for your wonderful stories!
8/11/19, 2:40 AM
I'm falling in love with this story :3
8/11/19, 2:14 AM
Oh wow that is nice :) I love the slow and progressive pace, I also like the varied personalities of the boys, it is delicious.
8/11/19, 2:14 AM
Now would be a good time to go read the last metawriting entry of mine, if you haven't had a chance yet, because I promise you that the story is not going to get brighter: https://wesleybracken.com/2019/08/04/metawriting-straight-town-notes-4/
Anonymous
8/11/19, 2:01 AM
I fucking hate that mayor with a passion, he stands for all thats wrong with this damn country, the homophobia, the blatant unchristian hatred of people just being happy being who they are. i hope he chokes on buckshot as the sherriff blows his head open
8/11/19, 12:57 AM
This was sooo depressing; Like watching a train wreck. You did what you set out to do...
Aug 8, 2006
8/11/19, 12:09 AM
So hot!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
8/11/19, 12:01 AM
Isn't being fully transformed into whatever the Master wants every slave's dream?
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
8/10/19, 11:19 PM
Oh wow! Just to get that much cum down my throat and up my ass would be nirvana! Much less to be allowed to become a pup for a Master!
Anonymous
8/10/19, 11:12 PM
I'm dying to read the next chapter and know what Vic means with "call you when he needs you". thanks for keep Richard partially conscious of what's going on , is much better if he's aware from time to time of what a big Dick he's becoming! You haven't give us any clue of how Riverside's citizens see the cops with their new set of mind, but I hope every men is now disrespectful and lustful toward the police force! the humiliation seems promising!
Anonymous
8/10/19, 9:42 PM
Oh my god you are such a cocktease and I love it.
I think the muscle slut needs to be taken shipping for a new wardrobe, and then paraded around town.
8/10/19, 9:37 PM
ditto
8/10/19, 9:26 PM
Addams always stood out because he would take these really good ideas and pair them with good stories so he would popularize both various activities and pair them with great story devices . knowing that this is connected with actual real life experience just helps . think about it this guy invented the milkman expanded on Curious cats the fantasy dude and pollination. if it weren't for his stuff was so nice you think you deserve an award or something
Yumo
8/10/19, 9:05 PM
I keep coming back to this story over and over. It’s so hot!!
Anonymous
8/10/19, 8:57 PM
Here's to hoping that story gets written some day.
8/10/19, 8:45 PM
Good damn fucking tragedies. i know it probably won't happen, but i want Christine to shoot Derry in the face with a shotgun. Ugh...
Aug 9, 2019
Anonymous
8/10/19, 6:26 PM
Very hot dude!!!
8/10/19, 5:52 PM
> Sorry, I haven’t actually read it yet. Just the title cracks me up. > And now that you've read it, you realize your joke is funny for a whole different reason, right?