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Anonymous
9/4/19, 11:57 PM
This was a super hot idea. Loved it.
Anonymous
9/4/19, 11:50 PM
Most erotic fiction isnt written well enough, to enjoy reading more than the money shots. But this has a cinematic quality begging to be viewed in full. If its finished, wheres the rest of it?
Anonymous
9/4/19, 11:50 PM
absolutely love the story... it contains one of my favourite kinks ... seeing someone relatively private turn into an exhibitionist... hopefully he makes sloan feel more and more horny ... like make him come once in night and once in morning before he wakes up .. then slowly also while he is having his bath... so on
9/4/19, 9:30 PM
Clevis83: Yeah I can see that lol... I wrote it for a friend but I only felt like writing 1000 words so the result was this :)
DumbGooner
9/4/19, 8:33 PM
Loved this! So hot!
Anonymous
9/4/19, 12:16 PM
I love this! I can't wait for the next one
Anonymous
9/4/19, 10:26 AM
Football?
Aug 20, 2019
Anonymous
9/4/19, 8:29 AM
More evil underwear conversions please. make the world into a world of hot guys! how about a corporate drone? Armani boxers turned a normal person in to the best corporate slave. hahaha.
Anonymous
9/4/19, 7:42 AM
Nice development!! I like the way how you proceed the story, not so fast without detail or not so slow with too much details. Love it!!
Clevis83
9/4/19, 7:06 AM
it's a nice story and with good erotic potential, but maybe the scenes take place too quickly
malskin
9/4/19, 5:41 AM
This was good when you first published it and still good now i have read it again
Anonymous
9/4/19, 5:36 AM
Incredible story as always Mr bracken.
9/4/19, 5:22 AM
Awww. I'm so sad for Peter. But at least he has a nice butt. So there is that. hehe I do wish he had touched his butt so he could begin liking the feel of it being played with. Actually, speaking of that, I wonder if he can add if then statements to the bots. Like "if subject touches butt increase pleasure" or "if owner says good boy to subject increase pleasure." That might be fun. While I don't so much care about exhibition I do like the idea of Peter not getting sad on his body. My last comment is thumbs up on the whole defense element. I'm glad he though to protect himself. As a note though having nanites that can influence does mean in time changes can be made. Like creating a bubble butt and making a person physically fit. I know this is porn but it would be cool if he comments that his work is porn now but enhancement later. Anyway good story!
Anonymous
9/4/19, 4:38 AM
Wow, this is completely a hot story that I stumbled upon by sheer dumb luck. Such a diamond in the ruff and had all my favorite fetishes; feet, hypnosis, and statue/freeze. I especially love the part where he froze bren while the other guy face fucked him and vice versa. Please continue to post more stories!
SalaciousSister
9/4/19, 2:38 AM
10/10
9/4/19, 2:35 AM
Great Story!
Anonymous
9/4/19, 1:21 AM
so weird, but interesting! Im curious about the follow up!
9/3/19, 11:59 PM
Due to vacation I'm getting to this serious only now. I love it! I love that Dan has been transformed and yet holds memories of what was, and how he's working to deal with them. I look forward to seeing the concluding chapters.
9/3/19, 11:46 PM
From farmer, to assassin, to cop. I love how "society" and roles are reflected in the units.
Anonymous
9/3/19, 11:11 PM
I love it! I'm not even sure why I love it so much. It makes me happy, horny and maybe want the same for me? No idea but great story!
Anonymous
9/3/19, 10:20 PM
that was too hot. More of the same, please.🤗
9/3/19, 8:28 PM
> Nevertheless, forums like this are very important to explore each others kinks and fantasies and get off in a non harmful way. I am thankful for anyone who shares their fantasies, because writing is healthy and reading is usually beneficial and enjoyable. > I completely agree! Many of my stories start off in a "real" place and then find their way into the extreme (which is the whole POINT of fiction). Interestingly, though I'm really into nipple play -- and my nipples are ridiculously hard-wired -- I didn't come up with this story because of that. No, for that, read [NIPPLESLUTS](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/853)! The idea behind this story (male lactation and breasts) was a kink of a guy I was trying to bed. Fortunately, he liked them. In this story, my personal kink is the spandex... I could go for being a Milk Man... minus the BULL.
PupHearted
9/3/19, 7:04 PM
This is so hot!
Anonymous
9/3/19, 6:46 PM
Hey, in my experience its important to know the difference between sexual wishes that can be fulfilled without harm (like nipple play) and fantasies that can be shared or acted out in roleplay. Trying to merge your kinks into 24/7 real life bdsm lifestyle has never worked for me and I know of very little examples where it has worked. Nevertheless, forums like this are very important to explore each others kinks and fantasies and get off in a non harmful way. I am thankful for anyone who shares their fantasies, because writing is healthy and reading is usually beneficial and enjoyable.
Apr 4, 2019
Anonymous
9/3/19, 6:45 PM
Always nice when a small guy takes control of a father and son.
9/3/19, 6:08 PM
Martin, thank you for the heads up. I likely got so nervous about posting that I didn't see it. I am however, having some trouble correcting it. When I got to save the correction I get this message: Grails Sorry, you're not authorized to view this page. If there is something I need to do please let me know.
Anonymous
9/3/19, 4:21 PM
So cool and so poetic. Can't wait to see next!! Thank you so much!
Martin
9/3/19, 4:08 PM
@Drake Nightstorm: Do you realize that you've made a typo in the series name? "Revebge" is probably not what you intended (series names are shown on the main page only!). You can edit the series name by editing the story (there's a separate field for the series name). Just wanted to let you know! And welcome to the illustrate group of GSS authors
9/3/19, 3:24 PM
Very nice, very very nice. Oh yes, make his hole sensitive. Make it itch with need when he's around his future master. I could see some training being done, maybe with a target whose not as nice as Sloan seems to be. But the idea of rewarding good boy and subby behavior with positive feelings and arousal is hot.
Anonymous
9/3/19, 3:05 PM
This was hot! Can't wait for more changes and sex explosions!