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jaiyoung@protonmail.com
3/1/20, 7:06 PM
Thanks for the feedback everyone! Hot suggestions are always welcome!
3/1/20, 6:39 PM
Incredibly hot, and I really loved all the little details, like the MC's unexplained nickname, or the command to not wear underwear. Great story!
Anonymous
3/1/20, 5:42 PM
It felt like ages but man this so perfect. Can't wait what happens when he get his Suit put on :D P.S. you forgot to type "R" here "retrieve Noels last thee ID digits again"
Anonymous
3/1/20, 5:36 PM
I'm really enjoying this. well written, incredibly detailed in descriptions and character traits. I'm really looking forward to where this is going and what happens during the latter stages.
Anonymous
3/1/20, 5:21 PM
I agree with one of the previous comments, “Stacy’s dad” needs another chapter! That story has so many unfinished possibilities.
Anonymous
3/1/20, 5:06 PM
I return several times to this story. You leave us with many unexplained details. The gym muscle guy is a bit fake with his repetituous workouts. He even admits his vain glory in large biceps to display his every whim of tattoos. He is manipulated in a mobile park home. He just didn't expect this ... with his "graduate student" fetish. My word ... all the right words. He's rather unconsciously seeking out witty nerds yet when lavished with a punishing spell... he can't accept as his destiny. Twisted all round you writing evil fein. Shit, thanks.
Anonymous
3/1/20, 4:45 PM
So glad you are back! The MCBrains story is one I really like as well and so it was great reading this story. You are such a great writer that it's always worth the wait.
Anonymous
3/1/20, 4:42 PM
Really good chapter. love where this is going with Butch. keep it up!
Anonymous
3/1/20, 4:06 PM
I've been bored, lately, with the permutations of same old stories but this was good!! Really really good! Love the potential and set up for the next story and the many after!
Anonymous
3/1/20, 3:56 PM
Slow it down. I love the confusion and internal battle and the surrender. Edge the reader with what promises to be a good story. Excellent start!
3/1/20, 3:31 PM
Its been a while since I read such a classic hypnosis story with a gradual induction! Enjoyed it immensely, takes me back when i first read erotic hypnosis stories. Thank you so much! keep it up!
Geoff M
3/1/20, 3:00 PM
love it!
SirD
3/1/20, 2:32 PM
enjoyed the first chapter and hope there are more to come.
Anonymous
3/1/20, 2:16 PM
While I do love this story and think it is hot, I feel like it has transitioned away from MC/personality change with the titular chip to more of just an incest romance story.
Anonymous
3/1/20, 12:35 PM
Enjoy the method used in detailing the depths of powers. The painted rings are noted but not necessarily extrapolated into exact powers. This makes the whole process more mysterious. We are left not knowing the full powers while also showing a lack of all-encompassing power. Perhaps note to his new entranced bartenders that they will go the gym more, and elope with the skinniest nerd possible on the side. HA. Good stuff.
EJG
3/1/20, 12:30 PM
hot hot hot
Anonymous
3/1/20, 11:10 AM
so so excited to see where this goes!
jackcspall@gmail.com
3/1/20, 10:55 AM
i literally cant wait for another installment of this series! Any idea when you might add another chapter?
3/1/20, 6:57 AM
AAAAAA THIS IS SO GOOD!
3/1/20, 6:30 AM
I have to say that normally a man having milk come out of his pecs isn't a turn on, but you did it in such a way that it really made the story. Good job on this one and I love the detail in the changes and how the milk affects the men.
Starrr Boy
3/1/20, 6:06 AM
Hot chapter but we need a comeback for Stacy’s dad. That story is hands down the best one on this site!
3/1/20, 4:09 AM
so hot hope there a lot more chapters.
Plague
3/1/20, 1:35 AM
I loved this chapter, the way Butch is getting more desperate for Aaron's dick, the way the dialogue flowed, it's all just so good Also how many more days until Butch cums? I think 2 but not sure.
Anonymous
3/1/20, 1:20 AM
wow, i love this so far! super hot! and frankly, i'm happy to have the addition of ben's crush. it adds such a nice layer to things! i also do like the current level of freakiness a lot, but it being permanent does put me off slightly. call me a sap, but i like things to end more or less happily for the protagonists. not in the sense that they return to square one, but in the sense that they're able to think, talk, function, and maybe end up with a partner (or two or three) in more than just sex. i'll of course enjoy whatever you put out, but for my two cents? i'd like things to keep progressing the way they are, and then be walked back. like the commenter above, i enjoy the idea of ben realizing things are a problem after a bit and deciding to restore darren a bit. i think it would be sweet if they ended up together :-)
Kyle Chu
2/29/20, 8:09 PM
Another awesome chapter! Looking forward for more
Anonymous
2/29/20, 8:05 PM
will we see part 3?
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
2/29/20, 7:51 PM
I would volunteer for next round of studies, for science of course.
Kyle Chu
2/29/20, 7:48 PM
"Nobody could have stopped us if we wanted to leave this freaky room. But we weren’t independent-minded any more. Our thoughts are now simply the commands of our master and he won’t let us go." Thats probably my favorite line in this story. Such a hot story!
Anonymous
2/29/20, 5:19 PM
I thought Ken would have commented on Butch's beard. Aaron needs to play with all that regrowing body fur of his too! 😁
2/29/20, 5:18 PM
WoW , this is perfect OwO