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11/5/23, 10:12 PM
HOW you keep getting better and better?
11/5/23, 10:10 PM
The best in the business is back! Such a good chapter. You are so good at this trope! Manipulative bottoms are the best IMO.
11/5/23, 10:06 PM
I hope Wash can be saved!
11/5/23, 9:01 PM
This story gave me a boner
11/5/23, 7:23 PM
that dumb bottom jock is just the perfect addition to this story! love it and looking forward to seeing more!
11/5/23, 7:07 PM
can't wait for all the following updates! your story is always a go-to when I need to get off. you rule, bro!
11/5/23, 11:05 AM
I love this story, such a fresh idea, and so brilliantly told. The characters are believable, the sex is hot and I’m loving the world building. Can’t wait to read more.

11/5/23, 5:08 PM
@[Jason249](/user/show/10022512) Thank you so much and thanks for reading through such a long segment.
Anonymous
11/5/23, 5:05 PM
HOT HOT HOT 😍😍😍 Amazing amazing work!! Instantly a fan since I've read the first chapter. You and @Elmara has been the best authors for this theme of stories. Can't wait for more dumb jock shenanigans. Hope that next time the coach finally gets a taste of his star quarterback 🤩
11/4/23, 4:26 PM
Always love a good furry/were story. This was a fun read.

11/5/23, 4:29 PM
@[DLOFT](/user/show/914496) thank you!
11/4/23, 11:44 PM
Scary yet hot. Reminds me of a story on tv about a plant that took over a town

11/5/23, 4:29 PM
@[Dream maker](/user/show/908635) thank you! my guiltiest pleasure is erotic horror. There is a part two coming soon
Anonymous
11/5/23, 4:14 PM
Continue writing more parts it's amazing 🤩
Kippers
11/5/23, 2:05 PM
The spelling errors were annoying, and I see they haven't been fixed despite the years since the author said he would. The idea is fucking hot, and I love the photo of the massively hung dad in just a t-shirt. I'll be reading every chapter, and hoping there are more to cum. These boys have been hungering for years, and need more than one daddy session. I'm sure at least one will want to bring a little brother along. Got to show him the ropes... that a sexy daddy can shoot in the air after a dry spell. I can't wait to see what each boy hopes for from his favorite daddy. Since Mr Study seems to be aware, I expect some daddies will really enjoy their experiences with a hot & horny young boy exploring all his fantasies. I hope further chapters have fewer spelling errors. You definitely need to identify who is speaking, because we absolutely cannot tell who is saying what.
Reb
11/5/23, 2:02 PM
Hot story; good action; good pacing. Another chapter would be great.
11/5/23, 1:43 PM
Brilliant
11/5/23, 1:19 PM
I'm really enjoying this story. Like others have said, I really like the two characters and their blossoming relationship. Although they both profess not to be gay, I'm still enjoying what they're doing with each other. Looking forward for more to come!
Anonymous
11/5/23, 10:08 AM
just when i think you can’t get any better you top yourself more than these tops fuck fuck the shit outta theo. this continues to be one the best stories on this site and i look forward to every update. the new characters are exactly what i’ve been waiting for and the set up of these jocks basically competing who can fuck theo the best is such a welcome turn of events. especially loved how teddys mischievous personality basically instigated the sexting towards the end. really hot stuff. completely assumed this story was done but this chapter not only surprised me but exceeded my wildest expectations. cannot wait to see how theo deals with all these competitive hung jocks. always love your stories.
11/5/23, 9:07 AM
Very stylish writing, very hot descriptions. Has a satisfying end...but could lead to more. The story is admittedly formulaic, but the execution is terrific. Thanks for beginning to share your writing here. I hope there will be more.
11/5/23, 8:41 AM
For some reason, I always thought it was one of the creepier G00sebumps stories. (SPOILERS) Maybe because I remember it as they all seemed to finally get things right, and then there’s the kid’s handedness that reveals the evil double is still out and the little brother (if I remember correctly) is trapped with no way out.
11/5/23, 6:40 AM
Omg, and update - thank you for posting! Top-tier writing as always, keep it up and have a great day!
Anonymous
11/2/23, 9:15 PM
Personally I feel the dudes are all basically the same, younger hairless athletic. No variety. Mix it up a bit more next time.

11/5/23, 4:10 AM
@Anonymous I mostly did younger guys because of the frat house setting but I can change certain photos since they are just for reference. They’re not necessarily concrete I have an idea for another story which does involve an older and hairier guy… I just have to get around to actually writing it. Still thinking of what their relationship to each other would be
10/31/23, 5:04 AM
Fuck I loved this part and thoroughly support more parts of his further conquests perhaps corrupting them in time contagiously with his cum?

11/5/23, 3:53 AM
@[EvanIshihara96](/user/show/10002685) Thanks! I was originally going to leave this as a two-parter but the ratings seems to be good (I think?) so I might do a 3rd part. I have a few certain transformations in mind that could happen
11/5/23, 3:19 AM
Hot dumb jocks are so sexy. Such a scene. Love the rimming. Too bad the jocks aren't bottoms and the gay guy is a top But yeah so fucking hot!
Jay
11/5/23, 2:40 AM
I had a therapist who did these for hinge to me. It was wonderful.
11/5/23, 2:08 AM
Please continue with Hector
Jan 30, 2019
Anonymous
11/5/23, 2:04 AM
Would've been a top-tier story if it were actually gay. Unfortunately it's straight, not what you'd expect around these parts. And the less I say about gay men fawning over homophobes and glorifying homophobia (like a comment above), the better...
11/5/23, 12:56 AM
Will there be more??
11/4/23, 11:01 PM
How about a more detailed and nuanced narrative of how the mind transforms under the music?
11/4/23, 10:24 PM
I never imagined that one of the hottest stories I would ever read on this site would be from the point of view of a woman. It requires tremendous skill to do this and still turn on the gay readers. I love all the ways Mitch is humiliated. Will definitely come back to it in the future.
Nov 3, 2023
Elm
11/4/23, 10:06 PM
Excellent story!

11/4/23, 10:16 PM
@[Elm](/user/show/567745) Thank you!
11/4/23, 8:49 PM
Theo is just living the dream. Hope you come back to this soon.