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11/2/23, 3:41 PM
Loved this and so happy to see more bator stories here.
KhrizzzToePhur
11/2/23, 3:28 PM
Saved the best for last 😈
KhrizzzToePhur
11/2/23, 3:27 PM
Submit to the smell 🐽
KhrizzzToePhur
11/2/23, 3:25 PM
Really enjoy seeing the pigs so into thier new lifestyle 🐽 Wish I could take a whiff
11/2/23, 2:10 PM
So good! Thoroughly enjoyed what happened to the neighbors, and would love to see this continue. Excellent TF’s all around, very much got me throbby.
Apr 15, 2020
11/2/23, 1:26 PM
Great Idea, hope to read some more chapters soon.
11/2/23, 12:26 PM
I love these types of stories, I hope to see more! Card games have so much horny potential that you’ve expertly tapped into!
Oct 31, 2023
11/2/23, 12:19 PM
The swimming metaphors are so beautiful here, and the wistfulness of this piece is nearly musical. I dearly loved this. I often have a very hard time reading homophobia these days -- whether it be the casually toxic masculinity of sporty types or ingrained behavior of boys brought up to unthinkingly act that way. I lived that life in central Texas and it was deeply destructive to the psyche. And I think it's destructive in both directions. So the fact that you transcended that with a sort of love-at-first-sight, damn-the-odds love story really blunts that. I don't care if it's realistic or not, it was palliative. Thank you.
11/2/23, 12:10 PM
Please please I need more
11/2/23, 11:21 AM
This is so hot. I can’t wait for more to cum
Jul 29, 2021
BodyOdor
11/2/23, 10:22 AM
A nice, tight piece of prose. And it stinks too!
Anonymous
11/2/23, 6:48 AM
It's great but there's only an indirect mention of his cock growing, no use of adjectives like 'thick' or 'big' for his cock, and no mention of its final size D: Loved the leather side tho
11/2/23, 6:39 AM
Vielen Dank für Deinen Kommentar. Ich werde das nächste Kapitel hoffentlich noch vor dem ersten Advent fortsetzen können, muss es aber noch komplett schreiben (im Kopf ist es fertig). Nebenbei kommen auch weitere Geschichten von mir, die zum Teil auch schon fertig sind. ;-) Also: Stay Tuned.... next chapter cumming!
11/2/23, 6:39 AM
Such a great premise, but then it didn't quite go in the way I was expecting and hoping. I know I'm probably too obsessed with characterization, but since you briefly introduced two supporting characters (Pete and Tim), I wanted to see more of how they interacted normally, then witness as they slowly changed and became obsessed with drinking the Bull Milk. For me, that's the erotic heart of the story, and I wanted you to spend more time showing precisely how the individual men had changed (becoming a brainwashed collective) rather than just telling us about "the silent, almost robotic way the the men moved." I'd love to take a stab at writing a story using this same basic premise, if I can only find free time to write in 2024.
11/2/23, 4:31 AM
We need more of that incredibly hot story! A new chapter please!
11/2/23, 2:28 AM
Whoa. I love ur writing . This is brilliantly done
11/2/23, 2:04 AM
So so good
Mar 19, 2013
KhrizzzToePhur
11/2/23, 1:45 AM
Think about this one from time to time. The brother on brother is sexy. Plus I try to pretend the transformative kiss was successful on the dad and how hot that would be too 😈
Dec 18, 2014
KhrizzzToePhur
11/2/23, 1:43 AM
Love the build up, everytime 💦
KhrizzzToePhur
11/2/23, 1:41 AM
So fucking hot! I like the cock ring addition to the story 🐽
ite
11/2/23, 1:37 AM
woow! this is a hot one!
11/2/23, 1:30 AM
I’m glad I found you on here dude. Love your writing. There’s an edge to it that gets me off. Great work.
M_S
11/2/23, 12:44 AM
And then he wakes up, back in his own now heavily used former body, and big bro puts him to use from then on.
11/2/23, 12:04 AM
Fucking great story idea man. Love it.
11/1/23, 11:09 PM
Goddamn that’s a hot starting chapter. I love your writing but if your not going to finish this hot setup, I wish that you would hand it over to someone like Jack Parker on here or some other great writer you like because this is just to fine of an idea with so many great possibilities to leave abandoned. Food for thought.
11/1/23, 8:12 PM
Check the throuple names at start of story as you gave Brett listed there, as well as being a neighbour.
11/1/23, 8:00 PM
Bro I've always loved the idea of cum being absorbed by the brain and making the person horny and pervy! God, where do I sign up for something like this?
11/1/23, 7:41 PM
This story is ++**total perfection.**++ The gooner lifestyle/mentality and the magical realism vibes of a Melder™ came off as such a logical evolution that I can't believe it never occured to me before. I use a text-to-audio extension to have these stories read to me, and I got genuinely creeped out at how eerie the voice part was. Very impressive how you shifted out of and back into the eroticsm but with higher stakes. I'd been wanting to make a popper trainer video for some time and also to write a story for this site, and I think this was the final bit of inspiration I needed to follow through with both, so thank you for that! I hope you keep writing and the community contributes to this series, we need a whole penis pantheon with lore and everything!
11/1/23, 7:23 PM
This is incredibly hot.
11/1/23, 2:42 PM
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

11/1/23, 6:54 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) It was so fun to write :rofl: