Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/11/20, 1:18 PM
That was so HOT! Well done!
6/11/20, 1:01 PM
yes second part will be much better
6/11/20, 10:09 AM
You're a really fantastic writer. The sex is some of the most visceral around and your characters feel grounded in the little details about them and their feelings. Thanks for writing this!
6/11/20, 8:52 AM
Awesome! As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)
LongtimeFan
6/11/20, 5:34 AM
Hot stuff! Love the description of the muscle growth and the button popping.
6/11/20, 5:17 AM
Great story! Can't wait to find out how Dan changes and what the sexy bears do next!
Lusty Stallion
6/11/20, 4:52 AM
Thanks Cutlerfan. I'm actually working on a little more ;) - Really pleased you're enjoying them
6/11/20, 4:36 AM
I love this. it seems like the abdl fetish is getting stronger on this site all the time and i love it.
Anonymous
6/11/20, 2:47 AM
this series is great. are you going to continue it?
6/11/20, 2:45 AM
I was waiting in dread for the betrayal that never actually happened, and I'm glad of it. That was an unexpectedly sweet, weird little exploration. I liked it a lot. Hope if it continues it retains the tone.
6/11/20, 1:48 AM
will we see part 3 soon?
Anonymous
6/11/20, 1:25 AM
Love it! Love the ending too where it hints to Dan becoming his big beary other half.
Martin
6/10/20, 9:16 PM
Really hot story!
Anonymous
6/10/20, 9:15 PM
So fucking HOT!!! I feel sorry for Brody but want to be him at the same time! Great writing and detail...
6/10/20, 8:51 PM
Hot as hell, and I love this twist on the mind control theme. Love it in general when guys are made to enjoy something they think they shouldn't enjoy. Thanks for posting!!
6/10/20, 8:42 PM
an excellent beginning, i'm looking forward to the doctor's verbal induction as well as the fuzzing over of the hero. the doctor's dialog seems like he'll either make the good captain either mentally young, dumb, or possibly both and no matter which i am SO down. i love giving a guy a good oral fixation, and I hope the good Doctor is a proper villain and not just an unscrupulous physician. the hero/villain power play will just add the cherry on top of what promises to be a new favorite series of mine.
RoboticXperiment03
6/10/20, 7:46 PM
An ideal future. I enjoy your dispassionate narrative style. It allows me to insert my high level of reaction to this experience and make it more personal for me.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/10/20, 4:50 PM
Very nicely done. I love idea of hypnosis, still have never been put under yet though. I would be willing to give your stories a quick look over if you need a second set of eyes for them.
Anonymous
6/10/20, 2:58 PM
Please continue,this series is a great.
6/10/20, 1:53 PM
Yeah there's definitely some more to come with these guys. It's a little subtle but there's already a difference in people who were gay before the nanites, and those who got turned by them. Not everyone can do what Ethan did in the last chapter :D Long-term, these guys are going to be like mitochondria - after all, they're "invisible" to the immune system (not that I have any idea how, I'm not an immunologist). I can confidently state we're not going Grey Goo on this one (at least, I'm not intending to take it there, but this is a community series). The nanites are designed to heal/protect/prolong mammalian biology, after all. By now they're basically tuned to human biology, but there's some interesting effects yet to come :D
Jul 17, 2005
6/10/20, 1:48 PM
this was the first erotic gay story I read, and it brought a lot of... ahem...pleasure. It's still a classic for me! thanks for the post!
6/10/20, 1:25 PM
well I suppose if I want to go in a different direction I can take advantage of the community function. But I was wondering about the fork that this would allow mainly that we could avoid the grey goo scenario in that he could make it so that the nanites are well neutered. The changes that are there will likely keep because while they may have been caused by microscopic organisms they are accepted now part of the larger organisms that they altered. Plus it allows you to say they're going to do something different turning people into living silver statues. Dream linking creating secondary personalities. Making them act like dogs and human skin. Preferring twink or otter as to honk or bear . I just like the idea of him getting to the point where he can start reprogramming himself or the effects of the nanites haven't gone mad scientist with the nanites having altered his head to always want to experiment with their full breath of abilities . but you're right that might be a chain for the theme and how things are doing so it's interesting to see how things play out
Martin
6/10/20, 12:12 PM
**Please stay civil.** That goes for both readers as well as the authors or their masters.
6/10/20, 7:17 AM
Listen whoever you are. If you have so many problems with this story then stop reading it. It is not meant for thankless persons like you. Readers who enjoy, read it and admire it commenting here and sending me emails. So you can leave and read other hundreds and thousands of stories. Stop being a sissy.
6/10/20, 4:49 AM
Intriguing start! Would like to see where this goes...
Anonymous
6/10/20, 2:56 AM
Agree very much with the first comment. Great writing of self-debasement and obliviousness... not to mention the twist at the end with Captain.
Anonymous
6/10/20, 1:03 AM
Really hot! Would love to see more
6/10/20, 12:24 AM
At first, I didn't like that you introduced Leo into the story. Pine's jocked up male slave world was so perfect, I wanted nothing to mess it up. I like your point that you wanted to mix it up instead of just enslaving one guy to the next. That said, I really liked the Leo factor in this. It was hot and it was a bit dark too. You portrayed the sense of urgency well as Pine rushed for the registration form.
Jai
6/9/20, 11:38 PM
Hot!! Good to see my name well used :)