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Mind bender
11/9/23, 8:08 PM
Love it! I love you're writing. I'm glad you enjoy writing this. I love reading it. I like Quiten😁
11/9/23, 6:37 PM
I liked what I read and found that this story already demonstrates that it will go beyond the dynamics of the two main characters. It's clear that Adrien already has other slaves (not all of them are gay, obviously) and even has a "Roman theme" among them. Will Adrien give the slaves a Spartan ideology (with lots of gay sex involved) and make them see him as a king? I really want to see this story continue.
Zombie
11/9/23, 6:21 PM
Will suck dick for next chapter!!
Jonanator
11/9/23, 6:19 PM
Hope more is to come.
11/5/23, 3:06 AM
Thank you for continuing this series. I've been wanting to read ch 3 for a while and you certainly did not disappoint. Please continue this series and know that there are people loving what you are writing.

11/9/23, 5:51 PM
@[Anon27](/user/show/927098) Thank you for your words and encouragement, don't worry, I have more ideas for some chapters, what I lack is time to put them on paper.
11/9/23, 5:50 PM
Has some amazing potential, can't wait to see where this one goes. Awesome start!
11/9/23, 4:48 PM
Great first chapter.
BluePotion85
11/9/23, 3:12 PM
I saw Mutabear and knew it would be good but mate that was amazing!
11/9/23, 2:29 PM
Excellent as always
Ash
11/9/23, 1:24 PM
Love this, can’t wait to find out what happens next!
11/9/23, 9:56 AM
I love a good story with an exciting plot, imagination-invoking description, and emotional context for a little hot sex. Thanks. Looking forward to more!
11/9/23, 9:20 AM
Awesome! Looking forward to more father and son bond stories!
11/9/23, 8:01 AM
This is quite hot! It feels very lived-in, and I always love to see kind of role-reversal dynamics (younger/scrawnier guy taking down a bigger guy). Nice work!
11/9/23, 7:27 AM
Hot story. Love the idea and concept!
11/9/23, 5:18 AM
Great start, I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see where this goes!
11/9/23, 4:20 AM
Wow! You guys were right… great set-up. Lots of ideas… next part coming soon.
11/9/23, 4:01 AM
No need to be sorry, it might have actually saved my life. The stroke (which was very minor) caused some minor memory loss and I was only in the hospital for about a week. Back to work in a month. And it prompted a referral to a blood specialist who diagnosed a previously unknown to me clotting disorder. Could have resulted in a heart attack or blood clot in my lungs, both possibly fatal. Instead I’m alive and in fairly good health for a man 55 y.o. Now let me catch up with my story and see what the mind of a dirty old man can come up with… ;)
11/9/23, 3:38 AM
Excellent job on this story! Thanks for writing it and sharing it here. This is my favorite type of story, featuring a couple in love where the husband is stolen away from his wife, who remains involved throughout the story. I realize I may be in the minority on this, but I personally love that it was told from a female protagonist point of view. Looking forward to reading more stories written by you!
11/9/23, 2:50 AM
Is there any reason why Will and Jayson can't take turns? Strike a new deal, where they alternate who's in control?
11/9/23, 1:48 AM
Very interesting plot twist. And very hot mind control scene.
11/7/23, 10:23 PM
Such a good brother, helping Malcolm find peace and accept the depraved gooner he is. No shame, only pleasure. All his innocence sucked away. This felt darker than some of your other work but the corruptive elements in all your stories always push my buttons. Can't wait until your next story/series.

11/9/23, 1:33 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Glad I’m still pushing your buttons 😜 I wanted to step up the corruption to a new level for the finale. Very happy it seems to have landed!
11/6/23, 7:12 AM
Bro I greased up just for this! When I said I wanted Romeo to have a happy ending, I never would've imagined it'd be like this! I love that he's able to make love with all five of his friends and that the stone literally worked to make a best outcome. Plus I'm so glad Gabe and Malcolm are gooner buddies! That means Romeo could leave in peace

11/9/23, 1:32 AM
@[Nixalpad19](/user/show/10034856) Always happy to give you some good fuel! Yeah, I angled for a happy (if a little twisted) ending~
11/9/23, 12:54 AM
Thanks for letting me know!!
11/9/23, 12:48 AM
I have not! Somehow missed that you'd written one!

11/9/23, 12:52 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Oh well the full novel version of The Reindeer Clause is on Amazon, under my pseudonym Scott Woodruff. It's currently on sale both kindle and paperback. The one story segment that's still on here is the original prologue (which got cut down and made less dark in the novel version).
11/3/23, 6:33 PM
Look, I know you had an idea for this as a whole anthology series, but I'm not sure you quite know what you have in the Sean and Patrick story. I'm not sure I can get it across. It is lightning, captured. It's an entire possibility of a novel in what is currently a short story. It is quite simply some of the best work you've ever done, and I am a raving fanboi of your other stories. There is so much more of this particular story to tell, and you will do yourself a real disservice if you completely abandon it for the rest of your anthologies. I'm not asking that you continue right now, but don't limit yourself. Keep this open as something to come back to someday. It deserves it, and you do too.

11/3/23, 6:49 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Yeah, the novel vibe very quickly came on. Additionally at least one of the segments I had planned for the anthology is tonally a very bad match now. It was fine when there was only the first part of this story written, but I'm doing a lot of reconsidering. Now it feels like instead of a Black Mirror type anthology, it's more of a big sci-fi thriller and some of the plot lines are just happening in a different place and the characters in this narrative line are just unaware of the details. I can tell you that I may not be able to release an entire book here but I will release what I think is a satisfying amount of material and then probably make a novel later out of it. I can't explain too much without spoiling everything but trust that I have a lot of stuff planned. Like I plotted out the first part of this series about 5 years ago so it's been incubating for quite a while.

11/9/23, 12:19 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) You... have read my book, right?
11/8/23, 11:35 PM
Love seeing a new Mutabear story!
11/8/23, 1:45 PM
Too bad this never continued.

11/8/23, 2:06 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Had stroke last year and I literally don’t remember writing this story… will have to take a good look at it and see where I might have been heading. We’ll see…

11/8/23, 7:25 PM
@[QuinnDnvr](/user/show/13929) Oh God, I wish you health and quick recovery as much as possible.

11/8/23, 11:30 PM
@[QuinnDnvr](/user/show/13929) Oh, I am so sorry. I really enjoyed the promise of this, but please don’t worry about it. Just hope you are doing better and I wish for the very best.
11/8/23, 10:38 PM
Haven't read this story in many years. Still gets me hard. Well done. Love the title.
Anonymous
11/2/23, 1:21 AM
Duuude, I thought for sure this was gonna be the big exposition dump chapter, you're blueballing me here! (Yes I'm a sicko who gets off to PLOT and CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT, don't kinkshame me). Also I hope I'm just reading into things too much, but if those "humanity" references in Freedog's conversion were supposed to be a dig against my comment from a couple chapters ago, we might need to have words

11/2/23, 5:36 PM
@Anonymous Don't worry; they weren't. **Freedom's** idea of his 'humanity' became a scapegoat as he 'fought' the brain drain. He sacrificed it in order to absolve himself of giving in and enjoying what was being done to him. Sure, he was pushed towards that very conclusion by Hank's words, but it was a welcome escape he was more than happy to dive into!

Anonymous
11/3/23, 9:26 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Would you say that you deliberately set up Carl as a mirror/foil to Henry? I'm reminded of an image from several chapters back where Henry saw himself as "split" into Duty Boy and Super Bitch(to me, representing his heroic and civilian halves, respectively). It seems like the key divergence between Henry and Carl is that Henry chose his humanity, whereas Carl chose "duty." The thing that *really* gets me going is the ironic outcomes of their decisions: in dogmatically refusing to give up his ideals, Carl actually ends up turning into a complete subversion of everything he stood for(the part where, even having accepted his slave status, he continues to try and rationalize Tri-Hard as the righteous Master and Nick just some demented pervert was especially twisted/fun). Meanwhile, Henry, who used his "enslavement" as an excuse to destroy his heroic image and vent his repressed frustration, is actually in a much better position to do something good with his powers, if he chooses to. And I hope he does! Seeing his heroic instincts kick in when he saw his Mas -- I mean boyf -- I mean Owner in trouble gave me warm fuzzies; I think part of him really does want to help people, but it just got all twisted up because of the constant pressure from his dad. He needed to throw that off temporarily to heal, but I think Henry will only be truly "complete" when his two halves are reunited under one purpose.

11/3/23, 1:03 PM
@Anonymous To answer your question; yes. The pair are both opposites and the same. I'm very happy to see how deeply you've analyzed all of this!

11/8/23, 2:27 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) But also to what extent will Mom have in that decision making? She is about to take a larger role as she steps into the limelight. She clearly understood the more underlining 'tendencies' of her husband. And therefore how that would likely repeat in her son. Henry has the potential to still be a hero. Maybe a rubber hero? He has some decisions to make. And so does Nick in conjunction with both Mom and Henry. And I am curious if his developing interest in rubber is more personal or something he wants for Henry? A lot of big choices laying ahead while dealing with Tri-Hard.

11/8/23, 5:34 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) There are definitely many choices coming up for our heroes. There's more of Sarah and the boys in the next chapter, but there's a bigger focus on someone else,... (Apologies to all for the slower than normal progress, my health is always bad around this time of year.)
11/8/23, 5:02 PM
Excellent story! It would be exciting for you to narrate in depth how Vicente managed to hypnotize his parents.