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10/17/23, 3:58 AM
This is one of the best-written stories that's ever appeared on GSS.

10/17/23, 12:07 PM
@[gayeplfan](/user/show/909079) Wow, incredibly high praise. . . thank you!
10/17/23, 12:04 PM
I feel a 2 boy coming😈😈πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯
10/17/23, 11:56 AM
Damn hot hope there comes more
10/17/23, 10:16 AM
Thank you for the new chapter! I've been re-reading this story's previous chapters last week, imagining how it'll turn out and I can't wait to see more of the family's hot perversions!
Oct 16, 2023
10/17/23, 9:22 AM
Love how the ending plays out. Please continue this!
10/17/23, 5:22 AM
Amazing story! I love the twists and turns, and since Robert is such a jerk (I don't like it when the cocky jerks win), I hope he gets a taste of his own medicine. But we'll have to wait and see!

10/17/23, 6:17 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Thanks. I am still thinking about how to conclude things with Robert but it will definitely be an exciting ending!
10/17/23, 5:21 AM
I don't understand why you would take good men and make them arrogant toxic DILFs. They were cruel to their wives and the wives didn't deserve such treatment. What is that place's end game?
10/17/23, 3:11 AM
Please, please, a crumb of chapter 3
10/17/23, 1:09 AM
Wish the dad was a slave on the cabin
10/15/23, 10:41 PM
The story is certainly funny but at the same time stupid. Professor X can easily return everyone back to normal, Jean Gray can also do this easily, Emma Frost and many other characters. In the world of comics, mind control or the like of this ability is not a powerful force over which there is no control.

10/16/23, 3:15 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thank you for your comment. If Professor X, Jean Grey, or Emma Frost existed in this universe it would make perfect sense for the heroes to go to them first. Since they don't, they have fewer options. Other readers have come to the conclusion this story does not take place in the 616 universe, which is correct. Also, if you've read stories with The Purple Man you'll know it's not so easy to resist his control. The Handler is partially based on him. Anyway, please don't leave comments on people's stories saying they're "stupid" in the future. It's pretty rude! If you don't like it, don't read it.

10/16/23, 9:57 AM
@[Manicorn](/user/show/10041123) Then you should have indicated that it takes place in an alternate universe and that some important characters are missing from your story. When you write a story, you must be prepared for any criticism, no matter what it may be. I’m going to write a story myself (unfortunately I don’t have time yet) But I already have a concept and a plot (and I’m ready for any criticism, no matter how harsh it is) Because in this way I can improve something in my stories in the future.

10/16/23, 1:15 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) No, I must not be prepared for "any" criticism because there are constructive and nonconstructive ways to leave comments. Yours was nonconstructive. The proper thing to do when an author asks you not to leave such comments is to simply apologize and try not to do it again. The fact you instead went on the offensive tells me you're not a person worth talking to further. Also, be aware of the type of story you're commenting on. This is a hypno-spanking kink story posted on a hypno fetish website. Would any of the characters you named be welcome in this kind of story? Would you want them to simply "fix" the hypnosis and undo the villain's work? Would that make the story hotter, or more fun?

10/16/23, 4:30 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Please get off your high horse good sir. Not everyone is here to brush up their doctorate in english. While its okay to give criticism, you could have worded it abit kinder. And you could say you are under no obligation to mince your words for the author, while i dont speak for the author, i think he isnt really looking for your criticism, nor does he care for it either. And as Manicorn pointed out above, its a sexy story about heroes getting spanked. Why are you thinking so hard into it? Just enjoy the story, or dont read it if you dont enjoy these kinds of kinks Have a good day.

10/16/23, 4:46 PM
@[Manicorn](/user/show/10041123) In fact, you are wrong and my criticism is quite constructive, you just don’t like the criticism and for some reason you are offended by it. Anyone can publish their opinion that they want. You yourself did not indicate that the story is an alternative to the Marvel universe (you made a mistake ) I pointed this out. You yourself said that there is no Charles Xavier, Jean Gray, etc. in this universe? Then who brought the mutants together and united them at school? Therefore, it looks ridiculous (that you have plot holes in your story) I just pointed out this (and for some reason you were offended and immediately got personal). Of course, I’m not going to argue with you further and prove something if you don’t see the truth You are already an adult and I am not going to convince you.

10/16/23, 4:55 PM
@[Moose](/user/show/908031) Where is it more gentle to criticize? In my opinion, I wrote everything quite gently about the story. I didn’t write anything very bad about the story and the author himself. I just pointed out that there are plot holes that need to be closed. I am for the truth and truth, I will not apologize to the author (like him he himself suggested to me). If he doesn’t like what I wrote, let him ignore me. And yes, sorry for the English (you see, this is not my native language) so there may be errors in the text. I think you should have understood this by reading what I wrote (I hope you didn’t consider me illiterate because of this) ​

Martin
10/16/23, 8:51 PM
Ok guys, I think you've all exchanged your point of view by now. Anything else will just be personal, and that's just not necessary. For what it's worth I can see both Zander's point as well as why Manicorn was offended by his way of wording it. Now just everyone be cool and enjoy what Manicorn has written! Have fun and keep spilling protein :)
10/16/23, 6:39 PM
Fuuuck this is hot! Can’t wait to see them grow into dumb, massive beasts! However, I really do hope Robert gets some karma in the end!

10/16/23, 8:12 PM
@[Bigger](/user/show/230293) Glad you like it. This is still my first story so I know there are parts I could improve but I think I've got one more chapter to wrap things up!
10/16/23, 8:03 PM
Great start!
Oct 16, 2023
10/16/23, 8:02 PM
Oh heck yes. Pits, leather and submitting to a cock with a worshipful blowjob. Doesn't get much better!
10/16/23, 7:59 PM
Amazing
10/16/23, 5:22 PM
I for one rather enjoyed this story. I will confess, I couldn't wait for the installations and went ahead and read them all from your lined profile. I have a personal fondness for Gambit I might add, so I particularly enjoyed this chapter and the next few to follow.

10/16/23, 6:40 PM
@[Napalm](/user/show/908052) Thank you! Me and my boyfriend maintained a chart as we went and we were actually surprised at how many spankings Gambit got involved in, lol. He isn't either of our particular favorites, but he's definitely fun as a "roguish" type.
10/16/23, 6:38 PM
OMGGGGGG THIS IS SO AMAZING!!! Do you do commissions!? Have a Twitter or blog somewhere??
10/16/23, 6:28 PM
Where do i get a dad like that , and def cigars like thatπŸ”₯😈πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯😈😈😈
10/16/23, 5:55 PM
Fuck give me a dad like thatπŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯
10/16/23, 2:51 PM
Really loving your work. I know some people aren't into everything but I'm really enjoying everything so far.

10/16/23, 5:38 PM
@[BBCody](/user/show/32686) That means a lot! :) Hope the next chapters live up to your expectations!
10/16/23, 5:19 PM
I didnt expect to have an update for this series and this is the best one yet! I’m curious to read how all this unfolds and what happens with Ryan. Anyway, I hope you’ll continue updating!

10/16/23, 5:38 PM
@[Rad Pits](/user/show/2239300) Thank you for sticking with it! I’m glad you enjoyed the update. I hope to have more :crossed_fingers:
Anonymous
10/16/23, 4:28 AM
This is such a great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

10/16/23, 5:38 PM
@Anonymous Thanks so much! Really glad you're enjoying it. I'll get the next chapter published as soon as i can :)
10/16/23, 3:13 PM
Holy crap! How exciting to have more of this amazing story!! Keep up the amazing work, my friend...maybe it's because of that file cabinet I found with a drawer labeled Max Lode that I put 'writing more File it Away' at the front of the stack of papers? :P

10/16/23, 5:37 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) I do as Edlam commands :laughing:
10/16/23, 2:49 AM
I think this is a good idea but it's all little chaotic with everyone having a pendant at once. I think it would have been more optimal to have each of them steal the pendant from each other.

10/16/23, 5:36 PM
@[Hypnofiend23](/user/show/2528896) It is indeed chaotic! That's actually why i list the rules in effect on X person at the end of each chapter, to try help you (and me!) keep track. I'll do my best to keep it as ordered chaos as i can. Thanks for the comment!
10/15/23, 11:52 PM
I'm having a difficult time figuring out who's talking to whom throughout, which makes it a very confusing read.

10/16/23, 5:35 PM
@[gregz](/user/show/605962) Apologies for any confusion! I've been trying to avoid a procession of _X said's_, _Y asked's_, _Z thought's_ and mix it up a bit. I'll see if i can find a balance for future chapters.
10/15/23, 11:45 PM
This story is progressing so well! Such a great idea. Looking forward to seeing the next round of changes. Personally, I'm actually hoping the perspective just switches back and forth between Aaron and Jack. I feel like Matt's perspective might be a little predictable as the douchey jock. Perhaps I'll be proven wrong, though. :blush:

10/16/23, 5:33 PM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) Thanks for your feedback and compliments! I can indeed confirm that the next chapter will be from Matt's perspective. Hopefully the direction i'm taking him will surprise you a little bit!
10/16/23, 7:44 AM
*sighs* you had to go and include a piss fetish. Welp. Guess I'll hope some other series comes along for me to get excited about and actively anticipate. Good luck with this one, for a first time attempt you're showing a lot of skill at the craft, even if the story is going in directions that I'm not comfortable with.

10/16/23, 5:31 PM
@[goodbiforever](/user/show/1090266) Ah i'm really sorry to disappoint, friend. I've been visiting this site since the NCMC days and am all too familiar with the feeling you get when a seemingly good story/series takes a turn in a direction you don't like. The good news is that i'm very much a take it or leave it kinda guy with that particular kink, i just felt it clicked with the direction i was wanting to take the Jack/Matt interactions. So i hope to see you again for any future story/series which have a good chance of being more up your alley. Thanks again for the feedback and words of encouragement!
10/16/23, 4:23 PM
I'm one for runing Bryan, but not corrupting him. The perversity of this comes from Bryan being a good person and good looking guy who has everything in life, the opposite of Chester. If he gets infected with the corruption, or becomes less attractive, it'd lose the appeal. I want to see Bryan be degraded, all while his mind is left intact and can contemplate his fall from grace and dwelling on it and feeling shame.
10/16/23, 4:09 PM
Start nice hope there comes more
10/16/23, 3:50 PM
I appreciate every author that sits down and invests the time to write and to seek out an audience by publishing no matter the format or genre; kudos to them all. Having acknowledged everyone let me focus on the one that is the master of this genre, namely you. You write so well. The stories you weave capture the essence of submission as well as the essence of responsible domination while staying clear of BDSM cliches. Thank you and I hope you keep writing. This story is aces.
10/16/23, 1:31 PM
Glad to see a new chapter, such a hot story! Curious to see how horny, insatiable daddy can be kept in check during the cabin trip.