Recent Comments

4/19/24, 6:02 AM
Love this. Always happy to read your work ❤
4/19/24, 3:22 AM
Fantastic work! A good old-fashioned hypnosis story. I went back and checked once I realized what the trigger phrases were--you did a great job putting them into the story just enough to be unobtrusive, but it's clear that it's how Kevin's power works. I also loved Connor gaining more swagger as Bruce lost his--such a cool swap. All in all, a great story! :D

4/19/24, 4:36 AM
Thanks @[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832)! I’m really stoked you like it, and that the trigger phrases weren’t too obvious. I’ve got to admit, I had another section of the story planned out (Eric and Kieran), but once the power swap was done it felt… done. I’m glad it feels like a good resolution.
Apr 16, 2024
4/19/24, 4:17 AM
Great story
4/19/24, 3:47 AM
This one's beyond fantastic
Apr 16, 2024
Anonymous
4/19/24, 3:28 AM
LOVED IT!!!!
4/19/24, 3:26 AM
Can't wait for more. Please continue.
Anonymous
4/19/24, 3:19 AM
I am loving this. Keep going!!!
Apr 18, 2024
4/19/24, 3:01 AM
Excellent beginning! Can't wait for more.

4/19/24, 3:18 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) I'm glas you liked it, I do have some plans in mind 😁.
4/19/24, 3:14 AM
Holy fuck this was sensational.
4/19/24, 3:07 AM
Always a great story.