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9/11/20, 4:35 AM
Fucking brilliant!
Anonymous
9/11/20, 4:11 AM
i live to serve the virus
9/11/20, 3:31 AM
fucking hot. can't get enough of this side of the story!!!
9/11/20, 3:13 AM
@Dayle - In that scenario, Aiden would have become the new master and the old orders would be erased. That was my second favorite possible ending and yeah, Aiden would have been much nicer than Cody.
9/11/20, 3:05 AM
You might have been making it up, but it became a cohesive story and one that many of us enjoyed reading. I always hoped there'd be a sequel, so many possibilities. I've gotta say, the fellow who borrowed the idea, the one where the gov stepped in and made the symbiots into rubber drones and killed off the great one with round up... he had a good story too. Kinda hoped he'd continue his version too. Like alternate universes...
9/11/20, 2:51 AM
what wouldve happened if Aiden put the collar back on- Does that erase Codys influence over Alex and now Aiden has control? The dynamics between Aiden and Alex wouldve been amazing. Alex I believe wouldve accepted Aidens control over him in more of a Boytfriend aspect rather than a Slave-Master relationship.
9/11/20, 2:25 AM
Hot! Loved the time jump in the end and the butt plug ultimatum.
Anonymous
9/11/20, 2:06 AM
Great story, and great finale!
9/11/20, 2:00 AM
A very hot start, keep it up. The writing was good, I'd say your opening disclaimer is the weaker part, but doesn't detract from the story. Just add some sort of separator between that and the story proper.
9/11/20, 1:54 AM
That's a sweet, warm happy ending. Good work on your first story on this site, Pawn! I'd have to say that although there were some parts in between that were not particular of my tastes, all in all it was a series that was well written, and the plots flowed relatively smoothly along the way. Keep up the good work and hope to read more of your work on here in the future!
9/11/20, 1:45 AM
Absaman, 15 years later, this story still blows my mind and remains one of my greatest fantasies. So glad to see you coming back to it and giving us more still. It may have gone out of control, as you say, but in a way, that made it so much hotter. Thank you for sharing your stories, and trust that we're still here desiring more.
9/11/20, 1:24 AM
I'd really enjoy seeing the differences between the two brother's isolation periods. So far I'm excited for where this story can grow into. Your grasp of english is actually pretty decent. Keep up the good work!
9/11/20, 1:10 AM
I know people in the forum have spoken about how artificial intelligence program can help write stories. But I've read long ago about programs that scriptwriters use to help plot outlines and keep a handle on what's going on. This enables scriptwriters to create more complex plots. I don't know what these programs are called....maybe another reader does.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
9/11/20, 12:50 AM
Freedom is one thing, it doesn't sound like anything has really changed. Another option might be if wearer makes a 100 percent sincere apology to whoever put it on & owner knows it is (maybe through a warm feeling or something) then collar would have had a positive change in that relationship. Myself, if somebody tossed a collar on my neck, I would never ask for it to be removed.
9/10/20, 11:15 PM
Congrats on a job well done for the ending! I hope you post stories again in the future
9/10/20, 11:07 PM
I really hope you put the other ending as well cause now I'm interested-
9/10/20, 11:01 PM
Loved this series. Thank you for your contributions and for having a clear conclusion. I hope you continue to write!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
9/10/20, 10:58 PM
I need this kind of special delivery service immediately (if not sooner). I have all sorts of locking gear here, just need ANYBODY to lock me in & take over those pesty keys.
9/10/20, 10:53 PM
I'm a sucker for a happy ending and really enjoyed how you concluded this series. Thanks for writing.
9/10/20, 9:36 PM
awww sweet ending. that's something new on this website. still cool!
Anonymous
9/10/20, 9:01 PM
Havent read the story yet, the long tag list is a bit overwhelming!
9/10/20, 8:59 PM
This equally hot and hilarious! I love that the unaware person is the one with the powers;. He just keeps getting himself into sexy problems and being so dumb, he can't figure why or use things to his advantage. I'm loving it!
Anonymous
9/10/20, 8:11 PM
Really liked the writing style, but it felt like you were trying to cram **a lot** of different fetishes into the story. That left some things feeling like they were just thrown in to tick a box (and give you an extra story tag) rather than really serving a purpose
9/10/20, 8:05 PM
I live to serve the virus
9/10/20, 7:52 PM
wow. just wow. I loved every second of it even though it was way over the top for the main character to get this one guy he was after. great job
9/10/20, 7:42 PM
I've just read this for the first time. Incredibly hot! Loved seeing the slow corruption.
9/10/20, 7:13 PM
Extremely well done.
9/10/20, 6:39 PM
I can't wait for more! I hope he keeps being a good boy
9/10/20, 5:25 PM
I really enjoyed this story! It was kind of sweet and again, really well written!
9/10/20, 4:28 PM
> What a cliffhanger! And you’ve kept us hanging on that cliff for about 15 years now. > > A cliffhanger of 15 years. I am very excited to see it continue. > I know! It's going to be like waking up after a coma. The truth is when I finished BOOK ONE in 2006, I was pretty much done with this series, over it. I'd been writing it for the better part of a year and I felt it was all terribly out of control -- my own fault, I had no plot for it. I was making it up as I went along -- I freely confess that. So I had been sort of dreading returning to it for years, especially because I didn't know what I wanted to do with it. That said, I'm honestly surprised at how much fun I've been having playing in this garden again. As I write this comment, I'm about five chapters in to the new material and I haven't been getting anywhere closer to any kind of plot resolution. I'm worried I'm going to be writing a BOOK THREE about this time next year. Shudder. Here's one difference: I've actually had to start keeping track of my plot threads, especially now, as they start to dovetail into each other. It's been a LONG TIME since I've actually had to write a plot down. But in BOOK ONE where I was just tracing the line (branch) of the symbionts-takeover, I was spreading out -- in BOOK TWO, I'm trying to craft something out of it, and I'm bringing it all together. I'm legit excited for you all to take the journey with me -- and I love hearing myself say that about this story!