One of the hottest stories! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Keep the Pizza Boy series coming! Great stuff as usual!

sold me on the device. I got to get me one, that is an Internet-connected chastity device. Reminds me of a story, "remote controlled" his device was nice to have installed, too. Another lock up story to read, as i love to see more parts, Is College Lockup BY Gladeaderxxx, Great story too. I too can't wait for more. rob.

Great start! Anxious to see where it goes.

Thanks! This was my little idea for this challenge. Given no limit on submissions and having the freedom to expand a story. I have some school stuff to work on before the next chapter, however, I will work on it as soon as my homework is done.

Exciting start! I look forward to the next chapter.

cockblock Sam always cockblocking xD

looks very promising. excited to read

I am actually quite surprised I didn't find this story earlier. It's amazing. I love how they change their realities so casually. Accidently turning themselves into slaves for their friend is quite genius,hope to see more of it

This is a delight! I’m very excited to see where it goes!

amazing story. SERIOUSLY hot but please ask someone to proof read it before posting?

Curious about the mating chapter. It's nice that Dave will take revenge, but Nate had better keep him under control.

Really hot! loved the barber part. Can totally imagine how he must feel!🤤

@DerekWilliams i gotta add my 2 cents. your writing has always been good, but this story is a big leap forward. one of this story's strongest points is the transformations are only hinted at, so the readers' imaginations can fill in the details. in the context of the story, this sentence: "It wasn’t long before he got on his knees between my thick quads" is one of the hottest things I've ever read

hot as hell dude, please continue!

Yeah, definitely get to cheat the rules. Growing up I loved to play in my own made up world so I could shift the science in my favor. I don't blame you for thinking certain things, and I probably could have made reference to saving the mounts being more about the time and resources to resummon, than permanence. Them being in a virtual hacked world, in the future, definitely lets us makes crazy assumptions and rules.

You might not have typos, but you definitely have wrong words. For instance "if we don't get scene" should be "if we don't get seen". These are what Prog Prince is referencing

keep this going. good start

Oooh right, its a game, so of course he can resummon the mount. lol. I got so focused on things being realistic I forgot it was a game in that moment. Which is funny because I totally focused on it being a game in both how easy he took cock and also the whole loosing conciousness when he was squeezed by the neck. hehe --- So, as a random thing that has no bearing on this story, I was reading an article about a sex cult and it just randomly gave me an idea of Jese getting an email from his friend where the friend begs for help escaping from a cult and Jese rides to the rescue ... only to get tranced and subjugated and made into a good boy and co-slut with his friend for the cult owner. hehe

@Heru Kane Thanks for the additional comments! I guess Dennis wasn't really the person to consider saving the mount. Either he didn't care, or didn't have a plan. The mount side quest was a surprise for him as well (just sort went with it instead of ending the chapter there). Fortunately!! The mount could resummoned, it just makes more sense to not lose it in the first place. Progress and resources, that kind of reason. I'm not going full blown ecchi manga with the flow of the actions, so trying to keep it a little more realistic. Dennis doesn't want to push his limits, so he is being careful. He thinks Jese will keep playing Star World which will always provide more opportunities. And considering Jese is still working on his modded quest line, he probably has the fool hooked. He doesn't need to make any drastic moves, knowing that Jese will be subjected to his mods again. I decided to bring the smith back just as a fun way to tie the mist back into the story. It was something that could make sense. “Which means, this cute ass of yours… loves to get filled up with a nice, long, fat, cock…” Was indeed a very mind melting line, I'm glad you reminded me of it... @_@ Dennis definitely wouldn't be the kind to submit. He can pretty much god mode (can 100% godmode), just needs to be careful. If the dragon spotted both of them, he might have needed to play along for a little, or could very possibly have been caught to a point where he would have missed the chance to save himself. Fortunately he is very wise to the Ai of his mod. But, maybe he made it too good? You never know... That being said, Trav and Dennis definitely had a fun conversation on the ride home about having sex, in which Dennis had to remind the dragonborn that he still wasn't going to bottom for him. Maybe they even discussed a sexy purple mist party threesome though... That would be fun... @_@ <3

Firstly, in response to your comment. I honestly don't care much about Azir funny enough. I liked the two others, I think they would be fun, but I really prefer only Dennis taking on the role of super dominant top over Jese and so an NPC doing that frustrates me. That said I do like what came of it in this chapter. Okay so complete commentry. As I said, I like Dennis now directly participating in the events. But I also like the interplay between Dennis being there and not being there and how both elements are used together to great effect. I like the dragon smith using an aphrodesiac, what a nice method of getting Jese to relax and not see anything really wrong with what is going on. I also like the smith playing with Jese's bottom, so sexy. Said smith referring to the naga is very interesting and also sexy. I especially like the line "Which means, thsi cute ass of yours... loves to get filled up with a nice, long, fat, cock..." So sexy. Loved the rimming. Nice act, that and the words the smith used, very hot. The fucking was great as well. I liked how Jese was a good boy, taking it slowly and steadily. Then loosing his mind as the dragon took what was his. So that was awesome. I especially loving him loosing it, zoning out. The scenes between Dennis and Jese was glorious. I like the manipulations, I love the coaching, the urging on. The pushing but then the backing off. I also really like, just like it looks like they are about to split up, the whole quest about the mount going off. Soo cool. I do wish there was more hanky panky while riding on the mount, maybe a bit of butt rub or accidental butt in face or something. hehe The dragon stuff was very interesting. Well mostly that is. I liked the submission of Jese. While I am very very glad you did not even attempt to make Dennis submit (so glad on that) I am kind of sad that Dennis didn't actually get to take a sort of dominant position either against Jese or that dragon. The smith coming to the rescue was interesting. I wish it had been Dennis somehow but the smith was a nice system event point. I am sad about Jese's mount actually, especially as it was from the regular game. I really do wish Dennis had managed to save him. In fact, this bothers me. Cause Dennis saving the mount would have given him an even bigger inroad into supporting Jese. So yeah, good mega chapter. Love the comments and the sex and the rimming. Love the submission. Loved Dennis taking control and commenting on about a dude from the past (true or not doesn't matter, the story makes Jese listen). I do wish there was more Dennis on Jese actions, especially when Jese was a bit out of it. Like maybe if Jese had put on the bottoms and such and Dennis looked at them and his butt. Or while they were hiding from the dragon Dennis was able to grope Jese a bit, maybe in an attempt to keep him from going towards the dragon. And yeah, I wish the mount was saved. All in all very good. Sexy. Lots of fun. Love the game system.

great story, can't wait for more

Round 2? Yes please!! And maybe a round 3 and 4 and so on. Loved it

@revenge Doing me best!! <3 I think I have one more of these chapters to set up follow ups, then I have a very important/special story I have promised for a friend. Star World has been sort of a prep for the style and what not, but I did get into it, so wanted to give it a proper arc ending. @Elmara Thank you thank you~ Especially for the long comment! First off, I think I messed up somewhere along the way with the armor description. The blacksmith made him a jockstrap for under his armor, but since the armor was based on the warrior armor, there is loin cloths covering his front and back. Fortunately, such an oufit could easily reveal what it is hiding underneath. But in the end, I like to keep my stories somewhat simple so that you can fill in lots of blanks to imagine the world as you see fit. I try to balance a line between slut and not slut. We need to ease the straight boy into his misfortunes!! And I definitely have more misfortunes for him ahead. I think Star World, and its console, provides for infinite opportunities for Jese to get in trouble. An early idea for the chapter was to have Dennis force Jese into some sort of quest that would have a much stronger gay focus. Like Jese having to pretend Dennis was his boyfriend to infiltrate a club or something more fantasy based on that concept, in which the final bad guy would abuse this made up connection to make Jese do things. However, I wanted to keep that fun for next chapter. But trust me, the excuse will come. I do like the cursed armor idea, and things of that sort. I'd love for Jese to wake up with cursed bottoms or something. That would be hot. I do feel like his focus on leveling and grinding for his top guild will take a hit in the next few months, haha. SO yeah, always love comments and suggestions, thanks for chatting! If you have anything more, please spit it out! Or email me <3 @Heru Kane No rush, but I do look forward to the comments. I suppose Dennis versus the NPCs really changes the dynamic of the chapter. Jese having to deal with growing feelings for gay NPCs, versus the stress of being around someone who knows him in real life. And the double stress of that person being someone who could do these "evil" things with him in real life. While always being completely unaware that Dennis is grooming him, or at least just messing with him. Like, does he love Master Azir? How powerful is that bond, that he has been kept from since the start of his misfortunes. But yeah, looking forward to more discussion with you. @Hypnoguy67 Glad you're enjoying it!! <3

Great start! I look forward to seeing where this goes, and what the limits of the book are. As for cleaning up more, and wearing less, I know I'd love a maid in his underwear and an apron dusting in some hard-to-reach corners. So good job!

Love your work! Your detailed descriptions are hot and understandable even to non-gamers. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Absolutely amazing. This is such a great story. Perfectly paced and masterful exposition - I feel like I'm in the story with them. Cannot wait to read more!

i love it!! cant wait for more!! was hayden aware he fucked himself for 12 hrs? can we see his reaction?

Omg this story is so hot. Would be amazing to follow Luke, for a whole day. His “sickness” getting worse. Him being around his brother, Manny, the coach, other boys on his team....

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