Recent Comments

4/14/24, 12:52 PM
Oh my word, this is an amazing addition to an amazing story! And they make such cute Toyfriends!
4/14/24, 12:02 PM
Interesting concept, looking forward to see how it progresses.
4/14/24, 9:17 AM
Loved it!
Pcm
4/14/24, 8:28 AM
James is so nice sharing the pleasure with his dad and big bro like this
4/14/24, 8:22 AM
Sooo HOT! Every detail in this story has been so much more than Wonderful. Well Done!!
4/14/24, 5:16 AM
As with BlondieBoy, this pushed a lot of my buttons as well. Mind control, brainwashing, hypnosis, and whatever other seemingly realistic techniques for being dominated and controlled are all hot topics for me. The level of mind control you portrayed and the words you used to bring that to life was a key feature for me. You used enough realistic hypnosis wording which helps me fall into the story and follow Lukas into deeper and deeper trance. Again like BlondieBoy, I would have much preferred if you had found a happier motivation for the therapist to enjoy his job, so that you could have left out the physical and psychological violence. Still, a story I enjoyed and would read again. Thanks!
4/14/24, 4:03 AM
Are we going to see AKA levels of growth in the next sector? *rubs hands together and chuckles evilly*
4/14/24, 1:27 AM
Make the team hypno the coach and the Mc will control them all. Nice start!
Hello?
4/13/24, 8:17 PM
Did any thing happen? Why you stopped making more chapters?
4/13/24, 7:01 PM
Can't wait for more
4/13/24, 11:23 AM
I admit it, I waited until the whole thing was posted before I read it. It sure was fun to revisit the brothers and I wasn't surprised that Little Budd created catastrophic shenanigans. I enjoyed the throwback to the original cum hot tub debacle a great deal. Smokey is my favorite of the new characters!

4/13/24, 6:29 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) "Catastrophic Shenanigans" should be the title of my memoir! Glad you liked it!
4/13/24, 6:02 PM
Love the twist in the end!
4/13/24, 4:37 PM
PLEASE continue this
4/13/24, 4:36 PM
Hope chapter 2 is coming
4/13/24, 4:35 PM
Would love to see a part 2 to this
Jan 13, 2024
4/13/24, 4:33 PM
Please continue this. So much potential with the nephew and even the sub Mike was talking to when Joe interrupted
4/13/24, 4:30 PM
Please continue this
4/13/24, 4:29 PM
Please continue this
4/13/24, 4:29 PM
Hope this continues soon
Mar 24, 2024
4/13/24, 4:28 PM
Hope this continues soon
Anonymous
4/13/24, 4:27 PM
Hope this continues soon
4/13/24, 2:31 PM
Preppification stories 🤟

4/13/24, 4:05 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks ;) I need to write more of them
4/13/24, 3:50 AM
I like how the story made preppification more of a twinkification rather than making you act goofy or "rich". It would be cool to see a sequel from maybe one of their punk friends POV of the narrators change (maybe he gets less twinkified and more like "preppy jock"?)

4/13/24, 4:04 PM
@[Sports Sheep](/user/show/10016794) Thanks very much! I wanted the story to give more of a hypno vibe with a little bit of physical transformation, rather than a rewrite of the character's whole history, which is why he didn't become wealthy or noticeably thoughtless. If I'm feeling inspired, maybe I'll write a sequel sometime, especially if people are asking for more preppification stories.
Anonymous
4/13/24, 12:51 AM
Great story

4/13/24, 4:02 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! <3
4/13/24, 4:02 PM
Great work so far, and a really unique concept for a reader-driven narrative! I'm excited to see where things go from here, and whether Casey gets into it as time goes on.
Anonymous
4/13/24, 3:53 PM
Hoping this continues!
mic
4/13/24, 3:03 PM
Great story, super hot, nice ideas, love the pony or dogplay , please more , they should tattoo their dogs , lock them in chasity cages , and more gaming and getting fucked , so hot