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Mar 27, 2024
Anonymous
3/28/24, 6:12 AM
Well written. Enjoyed this very much and hopefully will get to see this game played out!
ClamJeff46
3/28/24, 5:07 AM
idk if i'm comfortable with there being mention of a minor being sexually assaulted in a porn story. Especially when the main character who is barely of legal age is essentially explaining how's he's been groomed. Super uncomfortable.
3/28/24, 3:08 AM
WOW! That was WONDERFUL! I love the allure of Mark. He sounds like I wish I could meet him in the locker room
3/26/24, 9:53 PM
This was hot and horny, I'm hoping there'll be more I think it has potential for a few more chapters! :grinning:

3/28/24, 2:54 AM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) Thanks! It's fun writing about straight men becoming horny orcs.
3/28/24, 1:43 AM
I think it would of been hot if Cam was reluctant or did not want his bf to be taken over. Still excited to see where it goes
3/28/24, 12:28 AM
Isn't a foot fetish the most common type of fetish? Besides, I love feet, and I love homoerotic stories that feature feet. I'm actually on this site because I'm a fan of your work on Tumblr. I think my favorite story on that site is the one about the sock goblin. In truth, I enjoy all of your stories, so keep up the good work! :hugs:
3/27/24, 2:10 PM
Love this twist.

Charles
3/28/24, 12:21 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thanks. Hoped a few folks might appreciate the right turn.
3/27/24, 5:21 PM
Long time reader, first time commenter - this story is why i read this site. I’ve recently started hooking up with this older couple and I’ve felt some of the way Brad feels here- I haven’t gotten the happy scene Brad enjoys here but I’m really rooting for him. Keep up the amazing work🙏

3/28/24, 12:07 AM
@[BeezingKing](/user/show/2230179) Thank you sir. I have not personally been in a relationship like that, but I have several poly friends who have, so I have witnessed the good and the bad from the outside to try to draw on.
3/28/24, 12:04 AM
A bit dark. Still, like you said in an earlier comment, that was the ultimate direction the story was taking. Otherwise, the story was very creative. In a way, it reminded me of Dante's Inferno, with each punishment Ron and Chris endure reminiscent of the various circles of Hell. I thought the scene where Ron and Chris function as the Club's plumbing was both inventive and a little erotic. My only critique is the writing: You oscillate between past and present tenses. I suggest choosing one tense and sticking to it. Otherwise, I enjoyed reading this series. I look forward to reading your other work. :slightly_smiling_face:
Anonymous
3/27/24, 10:20 PM
Man, that training dildo really fucked Brad in more ways than one, huh This is such a great series and I eagerly await each chapter. You have the perfect blend of hot scenes and great plot! Really want to see where this ends. Do you know or will the characters surprise even you, Naedre?

3/28/24, 12:03 AM
@Anonymous The endings are written and being edited. There is a sweet ending and a dark ending I planned from the beginning. The characters did surprise me a bit, especially in the dark ending. It’s still dark, but I expected someone to end up being evil when they were just human. Only human, yet all the dark stuff happened anyway. I don’t know if that makes it more or less dark.