Recent Comments

Ryder
11/15/16, 3:33 PM
You've got a great set up here!! There are a many things you can do with this! I particularly liked the cumming with his feet on their faces. Yoy could possibly use that mechanic as a means for instilling fetishes into the jocks. Any fetish really. It'd be cool to see them hopelessly addicted to (insert fetish here) despite knowing they shouldn't be ^__^ Over all, amazing opening story!! Keep it up!
11/15/16, 2:42 PM
I'm speechless, such an amazing chapter with many new questions and hot as hell descriptions. I like the "two men in one cocoon" concept, it's a new element of all your stories, and in some way, I could view it as a symbol of their love, event John and Mike were no more. Thanks for you contribution!
11/15/16, 2:38 PM
I'm always willing to read and respond to emails. But yes .... the ending, I have in mind, may not be considered a "positive" ending. Everyone will be reading it soon. Because it will be released with an epilogue, it will take a little longer to write. I hope to have it up this weekend. And then this story will be concluded.
cutlerfan
11/15/16, 1:30 PM
I see it is going somewhere now. The story is a striking combination of rough manipulation and subtle bio-physical control. I have an idea how it may end at least in part. P.S.- I'm still thinking about your earlier comment about what a positive ending would be. Sorry, trying to figure it out for myself as well as you since I write a little fiction myself. . If you prefer I could email you my response when I am finished.
11/15/16, 12:46 PM
A really interesting and hot start, plz keep going!
Anonymous
11/15/16, 10:43 AM
One of the best orgasms before bed I've ever had!!!!
11/14/16, 10:57 PM
a clever piece of writing - thank you.
RobinHood70
11/14/16, 10:43 PM
Thanks for the compliments, everyone! @Cliff: It's Peter, actually. :) But yes, he definitely does play with fire...and we all know how that phrase ends!
Anonymous
11/14/16, 3:59 PM
Loved this story! The transition, the slow changes, the refusal to accept the changes. So hot!!!
Anonymous
11/14/16, 3:04 PM
Niiiice