Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/16/16, 11:01 PM
You are an amazing writer, I cannot wait for the last part!!!
Anonymous
11/16/16, 10:39 PM
Wow amazing! Really enjoyed part 1!
11/16/16, 10:11 PM
I always love reading your stuff - your excellent writing has inspired more than a few of my own stories. Excellent work!
screamingmoist
11/16/16, 10:10 PM
Thanks for reading! Glad people are enjoying it so far.
Anonymous
11/16/16, 8:28 PM
NIce work - really hot. You are among the very best of the writers here.
cutlerfan
11/16/16, 7:23 PM
Love the idea! Great pace...the story moves along without feeling rushed..more like a surge of lust building. Awesome!
Anonymous
11/16/16, 7:05 PM
Great start. I can't wait for the mental changes to kick in!
Anonymous
11/16/16, 5:54 PM
Has potential!!
lloyd311@gmail.com
11/16/16, 3:38 PM
Well, you can be honest without being rude. If someone's trying, and is contributing to this site, they deserve a measure of respect. Old fashioned thinking, I realize...
lloyd311@gmail.com
11/16/16, 3:36 PM
Great so far - looking forward to the rest. Thanks very much for sharing it!