Recent Comments

5/7/24, 1:02 PM
I have read the whole series and can't wait for the next chapter.
Art
4/25/24, 4:57 PM
Isn't it time you added more to this fun story? Thanks

4/25/24, 6:50 PM
@[Art](/user/show/1014223) Hey Art, glad you like the story. I figured I owed you a response. I have chapters 2 and 3 written, but hit hard writer's block in chapter 4. I wasn't going to post anymore until I figured out my way past the writer's block. I know what needs to happen in chapter 4 (I have up to chapter 10 outlined), but I just keep hitting a wall on a certain scene. Maybe I should just go ahead and post Chapters 2 and 3?

5/7/24, 4:46 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Oh god yes please
May 1, 2024
5/7/24, 2:35 AM
Wow, quite a bit different indeed! But no less captivating. 😏😘
5/7/24, 2:25 AM
Looking forward to more of this!
5/7/24, 1:07 AM
Always wonderful
Morbius
5/6/24, 11:22 PM
I already want to see the other Tompson brother and I would like to see Eric in his police suit.
Morbius Dunkey
5/6/24, 11:16 PM
I just read the entire story so far. The truth is that I liked it a lot, everything is very well thought out and now it is one of my favorite erotic sagas with the best script. I love the control that Jhon has over the father and son and the things he forces them to do that they don't like but that they enjoy at the same time. If I had to say only one thing that bothers and disappoints me, it is that the father still has a flabby and old body. I would more like to see Chris as a sexy dilf with a big ass and huge muscular tits. In my opinion, the scene of Chris and his son having sex would have been better this way. If it had been like that from the beginning I would be more excited, like Joe. But I only say this because of my preferences. I actually don't speak English, I'm reading your story thanks to the translator on the page. And this comment is translated from Spanish to English by Google. Sorry if something doesn't make sense, I just wanted to give my opinion. I hope you continue writing more of this erotic story.
5/6/24, 10:36 PM
Not too bad. I liked it.
5/6/24, 4:59 PM
love how much tension you work into your writing, would love to read a full story of the foursome!!!
5/6/24, 1:11 PM
absolutely incredible and original writing, well done!