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12/23/20, 8:39 PM
Lovely Story! Thanks and Congratulations! Hopefully you can do a part 2? Lol awesome job!
12/23/20, 7:39 PM
Oh, die Namen passen und auch der Ort, nur hat sich in Wahrheit der Jan geweigert ein erstes "Opfer" zu versklaven. So geht die Geschichte einen anderen Weg nun.
12/23/20, 6:28 PM
Paragraphs would be a welcome addition. it must be the way it's formatted for this site. On Metabods, where I first read this work was broken down into much more readable paragraphs.
Robodrone
12/23/20, 6:03 PM
Beautiful. Nostalgic. we had a hypnotic relationship as well. It had its own similar physical trigger that put us in His complete control, as if there was anything that we would not do for Him in the first place... and there were post hypnotic controls also, that we didnt know about until they were triggered on occasion, and after which that knowledge would fade until the next time.... But this amazing logical easter egg twist will make we hypno subs all ache with yearning. Thank you!
12/23/20, 4:54 PM
Merci Dopey, je t'ai envoyé ça en mp sur le forum de GSS ! Timmy & Hairyartist, thank you, I think I will take the time to write another one!
Martin
12/23/20, 4:25 PM
Breathtakingly hot!
12/23/20, 4:05 PM
I enjoy the themes of this story but was taken out of it by the disconnect created by conflicting descriptions of the protagonist. Was he an alpha, "titan of industry" (at 26, the latter is unbelievable, certainly for the financial industry), or was he a repressed virginal nerd? The story would have been served by a more coherent protagonist who had some sort of consistent personality.
12/23/20, 3:59 PM
mhhhhh,the sex scene in which the subject doesn't know it's a sex scene is a nice Touch. I like you Gavin just rationalized and accepted his role as a sub
12/23/20, 3:02 PM
looking forward to reading more to find out where this is going....
12/23/20, 1:16 PM
good so far. would like to read more to c what happens next.....