Recent Comments

Evan
1/31/22, 10:25 PM
Thanks for another chapter. I'm excited, as always, to see where things lead. It looks like poor Luke has some PTSD with his parents and the past. This isn't a surprise but I hope he can heal from it with help of the bois. I did notice the "slave" reference to Dean K and it felt wrong and out of character to refer to him that way. I'm glad you were conscious of it and it was just not an edit you did rather than something you meant to include. That said, I'm not sure what to make of Spencer. Whether it was all a ruse or if he has ambitions and lost some empathy but the phone has restored it.

SlutForHypno
1/31/22, 10:55 PM
@Evan Yea I think ill just edit out the slave part. The more I think about it, the less I like having it in there. As for Spencer, I might not have made this clear enough. But the voice on the phone was his voice. He made the program himself and the program was set to a timer. If you were also paying attention, there were some inconsistencies in what he was saying, and the events we witnessed. so I'll let you figure things out from there.
Anonymous
1/31/22, 8:58 PM
next one? pretty please...
Archer19cm
1/30/22, 5:48 AM
Search the site every day for another chapter ... yes I too hope for a good outcome, but looking forward to the bumps in the road. Excellent series.

Anonymous
1/31/22, 7:43 PM
@Archer19cm hehehe, wow. What a Lovely comment to read. I promise you poor Eddy and Yarif are busy in my head, just itching to get onto the page!

1/31/22, 8:33 PM
Thank you, ME-but-forgot-to-log-in. As Anonymous said, I'm getting there!
Martin
1/31/22, 8:33 PM
So very promising! Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter. Exactly my cup of tea!
Martin
1/31/22, 8:21 PM
Will there be more chapters to this? I really like where this is going...
1/31/22, 1:59 PM
I'm sorry but I didn't read all chapters. The first triggered something in me so I didn't go further. (My fault, not yours, obviously.) However, I came to this chapter to check the ending and I want to say thank you for bringing a happy ending. I was worried about that.

1/31/22, 8:02 PM
@Nephilim Yes, of course, I knew I wanted a happy ending for them. I'm glad you liked the ending. Sorry to hear the first chapter triggered you. I hope you're doing ok.
Henry
1/31/22, 7:51 PM
This is honestly such a different read! But i enjoyed it no doubt!
Henry
1/31/22, 7:48 PM
amazing! so hot
Anonymous
1/31/22, 7:24 PM
Such a well-written and engrossing story! Hope the next part comes out soon!
1/31/22, 6:25 PM
So just a heads-up: the chemical name for water is dihydrogen monoxide, which means two-hydrogen, one-oxygen, or H2O Hydrogen dioxide would be HO2, also known as Hydroperoxyl.